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5Number One Dancing Queen
I can really see those to going out.And that was funny with the lost child. Anyways Great chap and update soon.
5Number One Dancing QueenI can really see those to going out.And that was funny with the lost child. Anyways Great chap and update soon.
7/23/2008 c8 14Kicon
Yay! Holly must be feeling sorry for herself, and she also just said she has poor grace! LOL!
~Kicon
14KiconYay! Holly must be feeling sorry for herself, and she also just said she has poor grace! LOL!
~Kicon
7/23/2008 c8 3Tasha Mandaire
I loved the whole thing with Daisy being lost and calling Holly and Michael her mother and father. Another gr8 chapter. Keep up the good work! ^.^
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3Tasha MandaireI loved the whole thing with Daisy being lost and calling Holly and Michael her mother and father. Another gr8 chapter. Keep up the good work! ^.^
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7/23/2008 c8 rachelaine
I liked this chapter. The Daisy bit was so cute! And Steve, he strikes me as a big Teddy Bear. :P I really like Michael..he just seems like a genuine guy. :) Update soon I hope.
I liked this chapter. The Daisy bit was so cute! And Steve, he strikes me as a big Teddy Bear. :P I really like Michael..he just seems like a genuine guy. :) Update soon I hope.
7/20/2008 c7 14Kicon
OMG! Lisa and Holly were LAUGHING and JOKING with each other! There's something wrong about that! But I love this chapter!
~Kicon
14KiconOMG! Lisa and Holly were LAUGHING and JOKING with each other! There's something wrong about that! But I love this chapter!
~Kicon
7/18/2008 c7 1CorporationCrazy
I got kind of grossed out to be truthfull...but it was good all the same. I can't believe...ugh! Stomach hurting!
Let's just leave it at good chapter, kay
1CorporationCrazyI got kind of grossed out to be truthfull...but it was good all the same. I can't believe...ugh! Stomach hurting!
Let's just leave it at good chapter, kay
7/15/2008 c7 1Writing4Eternity
“I was six, I think. I hadn’t known what a lighter was, so when I found one, I got all excited and took it to the bathroom.”
I paused, and looked at Nicole and Josh. They were still listening.
“So, you know, a seven year old, and a lighter. Eventually, the seven year old should figure out how to use it.”
Was she six or seven? Anyway, this chapter was okay. :-0
1Writing4Eternity“I was six, I think. I hadn’t known what a lighter was, so when I found one, I got all excited and took it to the bathroom.”
I paused, and looked at Nicole and Josh. They were still listening.
“So, you know, a seven year old, and a lighter. Eventually, the seven year old should figure out how to use it.”
Was she six or seven? Anyway, this chapter was okay. :-0
7/15/2008 c7 rachelaine
Good chapter. =) And I reread the summary and I like it so much better than the "status quo" thing. :)
Good chapter. =) And I reread the summary and I like it so much better than the "status quo" thing. :)
7/14/2008 c7 2iPod
Dayum, I KNEW it was Lisa and Kidd! Yay me! Snaps for Hannah!
lol@screw morlas xD This chapter was great, awesome, cool, the best, perfect, totally lovable and all of the above!
Happy Writingss!
2iPodDayum, I KNEW it was Lisa and Kidd! Yay me! Snaps for Hannah!
lol@screw morlas xD This chapter was great, awesome, cool, the best, perfect, totally lovable and all of the above!
Happy Writingss!
7/14/2008 c7 5Number One Dancing Queen
Great chapter. I can't wait till Holly and Michael go out. Update soon. ^_^
5Number One Dancing QueenGreat chapter. I can't wait till Holly and Michael go out. Update soon. ^_^
7/2/2008 c6 1CorporationCrazy
That was ttyl awesome! Except for a few mistakes, IT WAS GREAT!
I have a few questions so can i send you a message? yea, i'll do that.
AWESOME JOB!
You've got to update! As in now!
1CorporationCrazyThat was ttyl awesome! Except for a few mistakes, IT WAS GREAT!
I have a few questions so can i send you a message? yea, i'll do that.
AWESOME JOB!
You've got to update! As in now!