for To Make a Scene1/23/2009 c21 
1Izzey
aw. that's sweet. awesome chapter. i can't believe it's over. well, it was fantastic while it lasted. good job.
1Izzeyaw. that's sweet. awesome chapter. i can't believe it's over. well, it was fantastic while it lasted. good job.
1/23/2009 c3 5KatieTheWriter
This needs to be edited: Instead I just grabbed the cars out of the ignition and started unlocking the door.
I think you meant I just grabbed the keys. LOL.
I liked this chapter. It was so sweet. And she needs to realize that Michael likes her and to stop being so dense. That is all.
Love it!
5KatieTheWriterThis needs to be edited: Instead I just grabbed the cars out of the ignition and started unlocking the door.
I think you meant I just grabbed the keys. LOL.
I liked this chapter. It was so sweet. And she needs to realize that Michael likes her and to stop being so dense. That is all.
Love it!
1/23/2009 c2 KatieTheWriter
This was a good addition to the introduction. However, I found it just a bit odd that Cale had the DVD from middle school on him. That was random, who would just carry that around at all times? LOL. But I still liked it. Maybe just have him threatening her instead of actually having the DVD on him?
Haha, but I loved how she got that Lisa girl back. And I like her new friends, especially Nicole, she's so chipper all the time.
Michael sounds like a good match for Holly. :)
Great job!
-KatieTheWriter-
This was a good addition to the introduction. However, I found it just a bit odd that Cale had the DVD from middle school on him. That was random, who would just carry that around at all times? LOL. But I still liked it. Maybe just have him threatening her instead of actually having the DVD on him?
Haha, but I loved how she got that Lisa girl back. And I like her new friends, especially Nicole, she's so chipper all the time.
Michael sounds like a good match for Holly. :)
Great job!
-KatieTheWriter-
1/23/2009 c22 3Essevera
haha i think it was a bit of a cory ending, but i love the couple regardless. gotta say i really loved the chemistry between holly and michael. :) kudos! congrats on finishing your first story
3Esseverahaha i think it was a bit of a cory ending, but i love the couple regardless. gotta say i really loved the chemistry between holly and michael. :) kudos! congrats on finishing your first story
1/23/2009 c1 5KatieTheWriter
I like your style of writing. This is definitely interesting so far, and I'm intrigued to read on.
5KatieTheWriterI like your style of writing. This is definitely interesting so far, and I'm intrigued to read on.
1/17/2009 c20 3Tasha Mandaire
Sad it had to come to the end...great job. Love the story from beginning to end. Still will be one of my favourites. You write really well so keep up the good work! yours truly,
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3Tasha MandaireSad it had to come to the end...great job. Love the story from beginning to end. Still will be one of my favourites. You write really well so keep up the good work! yours truly,
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1/10/2009 c20 5forever.ephemeral
...wow. i love this story so much! sorry that i haven't written reviews for all of the other chapters, i was just so excited to click the button for the next chapter. [so excited that i've read all 20 chapters in 2 days...sounds like a long time but i had to do it secretly since my parents think i'm doing hw...haha...]
this scene was my fave. second favorite scene was the lost kid in the park. hilarious. XD
5forever.ephemeral...wow. i love this story so much! sorry that i haven't written reviews for all of the other chapters, i was just so excited to click the button for the next chapter. [so excited that i've read all 20 chapters in 2 days...sounds like a long time but i had to do it secretly since my parents think i'm doing hw...haha...]
this scene was my fave. second favorite scene was the lost kid in the park. hilarious. XD
1/9/2009 c20 Jen
I totally love this last chapter. They are finally together!Yaya!
I totally love this last chapter. They are finally together!Yaya!
1/9/2009 c20 5Number One Dancing Queen
I love them both glad there finally together. Update ASAP!
I know what you mean about the hw. I hate it.
5Number One Dancing QueenI love them both glad there finally together. Update ASAP!
I know what you mean about the hw. I hate it.
1/8/2009 c20 2ties.are.great.belts
I'm so sad that it'as over! Such a great amazing story... :] I'm glad yo uwrote it and im glad I read it. and no, it was NOT over done in any way and Ill be waiting for the epilogue. Oh, and I got homework in all of my subjects the first day back :]
2ties.are.great.beltsI'm so sad that it'as over! Such a great amazing story... :] I'm glad yo uwrote it and im glad I read it. and no, it was NOT over done in any way and Ill be waiting for the epilogue. Oh, and I got homework in all of my subjects the first day back :]
1/8/2009 c20 9IHateMyLoveLife
(sniffs) It's over. This was a really good story. The sappy ending is kinda a 180 of the beginning. Endings always suck because you don't want things to end, but 'all good things must come to an end.'
9IHateMyLoveLife(sniffs) It's over. This was a really good story. The sappy ending is kinda a 180 of the beginning. Endings always suck because you don't want things to end, but 'all good things must come to an end.'