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1/6/2018 c10 4R. Ficst
Found my way back for a re-read. :) I am quite fond of these characters
3/27/2014 c11 Fangirl
xD lol is Rabbit in the cat now... lolz?
6/8/2013 c11 R. Ficst
Hahaha, hilarious ending. For some reason the jumpy timeline and the pacing kind of threw me a bit, but overall, I enjoyed the story.
9/22/2012 c11 7Life's Unexpected Turns
This is such an amusing story, the story is written in a style that is uncommon, but good. Anyway, great story!
3/27/2012 c11 5Arya Yamamoto
Hilariously good. This story needs more attention than it got lol. Brilliant dialogue if a bit long. Outrageous characters that captured my attention with the first two chapters =) Love it!
6/19/2011 c11 1Sundavar
Very interesting, I'll have to admit that I had a hard time finishing the story, though I am very happy I did!

Some more description and narration could be warranted in the beginning, a little more context would have improved the flow and allowed for the reader to become more attached to the characters.

I admire your ability to reveal something which has occured without needing to express it directly. For instance, the reader can infer that the cat, Jelly, now has the soul of Rabbit since Jelly's soul is now with Lali and Kaushal.

Overall a very nice story, Thank you for posting!
2/2/2011 c2 6the sacred night
The parentheses are not usually confusing when it's just one or two lines, or when Kaushal is talking telepathically and Lali is talking out loud, but in this chapter it was tres confusing. There were a lot of times it seemed like they weren't just alternating, but like two lines in a row were the same person talking.
9/22/2010 c11 20purplehost
I wish there had been a little more description about his transformation. Other than that, I enjoyed it.
7/28/2010 c11 4Lexy-Kun
Hello !

So, I've read all of it in one sitting, and thought I should at least attempt to leave a small review.

I must admit I wasn't entirely convinced during the first two chapters, sadly I'm not entirely sure why. Maybe because I had a moment getting used to your grammar (which probably comes from the fact that english is not my mother language), and maybe it's also from the minimalistic way you have to present us your story.

After a few chapters though, I found myself gradually hooked and I liked your story better and better with each line I read. Your characters are interesting; I like the way the demon seems actually less evil in his deeds than the human. Having a eunuque as a main character is rather new as well, I really loved that twist ! (And, you know, having him get a "complete" body and use it to its full advantage was pretty great as well). I also liked the idea of a ghost cat and a live possessed one. It's great how Kaushal managed to get a body without actually hurting the soul in it (and after all, being stuck into the body of the cat you killed is probably the perfect punishment, isn't it? though, who never dreamt of being a cat?)

I was a bit disappointed by the fact that they didn't talk about how they felt about being a mated pair. But well, maybe the fact that they didn't felt the need to speak about it is revealing enough.

Anyway, good job and thanks for this story!
1/16/2010 c11 BlAcKMaCgICWoMeN
i love it but it so reminds me of sherlock holmes in a away i wish there was another story also what was l hinting at did he want to be marked as a mate hmm i dont well it was simply smashing 4/5
10/18/2009 c11 5Curb Crasher
The banter is all so witty it makes me feel incompetent in a good way. Sweet ending! (Not sweet as in awesome, but sweet as in sweet. I mean, it was awesome, too, but when sweet means awesome I always imagine some annoying surfer-dude voice, and I can't stand those. . . .)
2/24/2009 c11 4Amindaya
That was QUITE amazing. It's like a minimalist style, mostly conversation, and even then, you got the point across so perfectly! And the dialogue is so gosh darn witty. :) The plot was perfect...no fluff, yet all entertainment.
11/14/2008 c11 3Vera Dicere
o i really quite adore this. i was hoping the whole story that somehow these two would end up together, since it seemed so obvious they were well matched. lali was charming and wonderful, and kaushal was endearingly attached to lali in his own round about way. i will admit that i do kind of wish there had been a bit more, after they finally got together, or perhaps a bit of lali's thoughts, especially just before and after. i can't help bt wonder a bit about how he viewed kaushal, beyond his obvious fondness. despite these minor desires of mine, i quite enjoyed the story. very cute and fun. :)
5/1/2008 c11 6theStarfly
Aha! I liked this, very cute story! :) I hope you use Lali and Kaushal in the future, they make an adorable couple :3
4/27/2008 c11 6the sacred night
So glad to see another piece from you! I love your sense of humor, and your sense of eroticism doesn't hurt ;) The dash of mystery thrown in was a good choice. I only wish that part had been more developed. Almost all of the information we got about Rabbit was hinted rather than shown, and I'm not sure if that was deliberate, but I would have liked more, personally. I liked the story a lot.
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