for The Biteathon11/25/2008 c1 MK16
THIS IS HILARIOUS
i love the idea :D
awesome job
i personally half a biteathom year long ^_^
biting ppl is tons of fun!
well done
THIS IS HILARIOUS
i love the idea :D
awesome job
i personally half a biteathom year long ^_^
biting ppl is tons of fun!
well done
10/26/2008 c1 
41AbbeyEileen
Ehh. Needs to be polished up a little more- boring sentence structure, kind of repetitive. It went by really quickly, and I'd like to have seen it dragged out a little more... Good effort, though. It was cute.
41AbbeyEileenEhh. Needs to be polished up a little more- boring sentence structure, kind of repetitive. It went by really quickly, and I'd like to have seen it dragged out a little more... Good effort, though. It was cute.
9/13/2008 c1 13VelvetyCheerio
I laughed when Lily was like, "It is so not cool to go around biting people!" This is good. How do I vote? Where do I vote, more like it. Are reviews votes? Whatever. I love it. There was a sentence in here that didn't have a closed quotation. It was the same one that made me laugh.
I hope you win! You're awesome, good job. VelvetyCheerio.
13VelvetyCheerioI laughed when Lily was like, "It is so not cool to go around biting people!" This is good. How do I vote? Where do I vote, more like it. Are reviews votes? Whatever. I love it. There was a sentence in here that didn't have a closed quotation. It was the same one that made me laugh.
I hope you win! You're awesome, good job. VelvetyCheerio.
7/16/2008 c1 10Caecilia
That was hilarious! I probably would've never thought of that. The idea of the Biteathon is hilarious, I have to tell my friend about your story, she'll definitely love it. I love Samuel's rant about all the good one's being bitten. Very creative.
Her friend got bitten too. Haha. I love the moral of the story, very entertaining read!
*for the Beer Run, at the Roadhouse-link in my profile*
~Caecilia
10CaeciliaThat was hilarious! I probably would've never thought of that. The idea of the Biteathon is hilarious, I have to tell my friend about your story, she'll definitely love it. I love Samuel's rant about all the good one's being bitten. Very creative.
Her friend got bitten too. Haha. I love the moral of the story, very entertaining read!
*for the Beer Run, at the Roadhouse-link in my profile*
~Caecilia
7/9/2008 c1 20Twilight Starr
It was absolutely hilarious! "Courtacy" should be "courtesy". I think instead of "defiantly" should be "definitely"."But your not a stranger," should be "But [you're] not a stranger,"
I like the alliteration with the names. Nice job on slipping the cookie in there. It was original. I enjoyed it. :D
Thanks for the reviews of "A Liar's Mission". I really appreciate it.
Have a lovely day.
~Twilight Starr~
20Twilight StarrIt was absolutely hilarious! "Courtacy" should be "courtesy". I think instead of "defiantly" should be "definitely"."But your not a stranger," should be "But [you're] not a stranger,"
I like the alliteration with the names. Nice job on slipping the cookie in there. It was original. I enjoyed it. :D
Thanks for the reviews of "A Liar's Mission". I really appreciate it.
Have a lovely day.
~Twilight Starr~
6/17/2008 c1 4GrannyP
What a hilarious challenge! The silliness of it was quite funny... a biteathon! I never would have thought of anything like that myself!
4GrannyPWhat a hilarious challenge! The silliness of it was quite funny... a biteathon! I never would have thought of anything like that myself!
5/24/2008 c1 22effervescent-sentiments
Haha, I did this exact same challenge! It's on my FictionPress, if you'd care to review back.
Yours was too cute! I'm itching to bite someone now. Thanks a bunch! Haha.
Nice job!
Julia
22effervescent-sentimentsHaha, I did this exact same challenge! It's on my FictionPress, if you'd care to review back.
Yours was too cute! I'm itching to bite someone now. Thanks a bunch! Haha.
Nice job!
Julia
4/28/2008 c1 8heartfeltlove
^.^
I liked it! I wanna join a biteathon!
In the beinging(sp) there was a typo you put "courtacy" it's supposed to be courtesy. :)
Good job!
8heartfeltlove^.^
I liked it! I wanna join a biteathon!
In the beinging(sp) there was a typo you put "courtacy" it's supposed to be courtesy. :)
Good job!