11/21/2005 c1 2MistiWolanski
Oops. I defended you against a misinformed reviewer and I forgot to review you!

I'm sorry.

Nicely done. I have one little grammatical note...

"it's" means "it is". "its" is possessive. PLEASE change that. It's highly distracting.

Keep writing!

-Misti

P.S. Thank you for your review of Evonale. The anti-climatic aspect I'll probably keep (one point of Evonale is to contradict average fantasies), but I'll strongly consider what you mentioned. I am making it longer (not yet posting it online), and I'm rewriting it both for publishing it and improving my craft.

We sound like we'd get along well. :) You're welcome to e-mail me or visit my website if you like-critique is the point of Critique_Helps!

God Bless you! :)

8/8/2003 c1 1Raekami
This isn't really a review of your poem, although I will say it's not one of the best of read, but I wanted to say this. For someone who is a wanna-be-writer like many people on this site, you have SOME nerve putting other people down. I've been reading some reviews you've been putting on a novel that my friend is currently writing, and you know what? I think you're jealous, plain and simple. She has the talent, the ideas, the stamina, and you can't stand it. Why else would you write nothing but NEGATIVE reviews? When writing a review, if you're going to point out something BAD, try to point out something JUST AS GREAT to even it out. Not simply say "this story sucks because this character contradicts itself" or some other reason and blah, blah, blah. You have NO RIGHT whatsoever to criticize someone else's writing because a) you aren't a professional writer so therefore are as unexperienced in literature as the next person and b) you are simply JEALOUS of anything that is better than yours. Yes, that's it. You're jealous. That's the only reason I can fathom that you would write something so hurtful about someone else's stuff. Usually one person is their own worst critic, but with YOU around, they don't need themselves! You're like a drunken stepmother who won't give her child any credit whatsoever, especially if something is absolutely great. My suggestion, before you comment on anyone else's work, take a lesson in proper etiquette.

Now, for the ACTUAL review of your poem:

It's not the worst, but it's not the best. Not all people are good at writing poems, but you didn't do a bad job with the rhyming.

Happy writing,

Rae

8/20/2002 c1 15aPPle-FrrEAk
This is !(okay my hyperness has run out!) u should write more poetry! Was this from ur annyia story or was it more random?

5/9/2002 c1 1LaughingGasGirl
Well you said not to review if we didn't like it and i thought out of the kindness of my own heart that i should just review and tell you that, well...it sucks and i hope i never have to read it again. But your other storys are really good so i guess you need a really, no make that extremely, bad thing sometimes.

3/5/2002 c1 12All Mighty Terrestrial
I could see this happening in my mind as I read it. Very cool.

1/25/2002 c1 7Snowlily
WOW! That was fantastic! Two thumbs up to Zsa Zsa. =) And ten thumbs up to you! (Er... oops, I forgot that I only have two thumbs... oh well.) Anyway, I'm compltely OBSESSED with dragons, and I have my own dragon poem- but mine sorta tells a story. It's nowhere as good as yours, but it's 'ok'. I'd love it if you could read it! Well, as for now, here are a few of my other dragon poems (they're each one verse only)-

The dragon is so beautiful,

It’s soaring through the air,

It stretches its wings across the plains,

And enters its dark lair.

The dragon spreads its wings across,

All the dangers of life- lost,

It fly’s across the shining sun,

All it’s problems lowered to none.

Golden dragon, Welcome home,

Please don’t leave; we’ve missed you so,

Smile again, like you’ve done before,

Yesterday’s dangers are no more.

-Yeah, I know they're dumb, and they sound like a four year old wrote them, but I'm no great poet so there ya go!

~Lils

1/4/2002 c1 9Kalah Exclamation Mark
This poem is written quite beautifully and I feel is probably your best. I don't see where you come from when you say it sucks. ^^;; Well, good work and please continue writing. :) -Kalah *hands the author a shiny penny and runs off to her cave*

4/26/2001 c1 8Amethyst LaReine
That's awesum! It's really good! I remember writing a short story about a dragon for English class a few months ago... It was sort of a romance. My English teacher was so amazed, he practically bowed at my feet cuz he thought it was so good.