for Students Come With Computer Chips: Snow Days4/25/2008 c1 
9DreamSweet
That was well written, but I think it could have used more humour. The senior class was barricading the school with snow for a reason right? Some kind of prank? So, in my opinion, there should have been less of the cloak and dagger stuff (though some of that's good) and more humour.
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9DreamSweetThat was well written, but I think it could have used more humour. The senior class was barricading the school with snow for a reason right? Some kind of prank? So, in my opinion, there should have been less of the cloak and dagger stuff (though some of that's good) and more humour.
V