for Secret Affair7/27/2008 c13 RomeLi
I really enjoyed this story and I totally bought Zac's explanation for why he waited to tell her he was moving there; but they never even discussed 13 years ago! I'd think she'd want to ask about that! I would:). Thanks for finishing this!
I really enjoyed this story and I totally bought Zac's explanation for why he waited to tell her he was moving there; but they never even discussed 13 years ago! I'd think she'd want to ask about that! I would:). Thanks for finishing this!
7/27/2008 c11 RomeLi
Okay, I really don't get it. I love this story, but why would Zac continue to let Sam think he was dating her sister? What was the point in that! Please clarify that plot hole for me!
Okay, I really don't get it. I love this story, but why would Zac continue to let Sam think he was dating her sister? What was the point in that! Please clarify that plot hole for me!
7/26/2008 c13 Moonlight Density
Awee! We didnt get names dammit! :O Lmfao, it would've been hilarious if the babies decided to come after they had just finished having sex hehehe or whilst doing it LOL.. (A) Anywhosee! Loved the story
Awee! We didnt get names dammit! :O Lmfao, it would've been hilarious if the babies decided to come after they had just finished having sex hehehe or whilst doing it LOL.. (A) Anywhosee! Loved the story
7/26/2008 c13 OoohLookACat
very cute
i knew she wouldn't have a big wedding
and yay! all is well!
loved every minute of it!
so sad to see it go though
izzie
very cute
i knew she wouldn't have a big wedding
and yay! all is well!
loved every minute of it!
so sad to see it go though
izzie
7/26/2008 c13 
4rocknrosebubbles
aww how cute :) loved this chapter and the whole story infact good job :)
4rocknrosebubblesaww how cute :) loved this chapter and the whole story infact good job :)
7/26/2008 c13 brokencrystal7
i cant wait to know what sex the babies are. i was shocked when you said that she was having twins. again something i was not expecting. '0' i like that scott and zac are finally playing nice with each other ^-^ finally everybody is happy!
i cant wait to know what sex the babies are. i was shocked when you said that she was having twins. again something i was not expecting. '0' i like that scott and zac are finally playing nice with each other ^-^ finally everybody is happy!
7/26/2008 c13 darkchocolatediva
no! I cant believe its over...*tear*. Anyways cant wait till ur next story.
no! I cant believe its over...*tear*. Anyways cant wait till ur next story.
7/23/2008 c12 3babyonyee
that was a cute chapter...I thought that Sam would give up some sort of fight...or say something...but good none the less! keep up the good work!
3babyonyeethat was a cute chapter...I thought that Sam would give up some sort of fight...or say something...but good none the less! keep up the good work!
7/23/2008 c12 falling.without.care
Oh so sad only one chapter to go :(
but you know what they say...'all good things must come to an end'
I really loved this chapter!
Oh so sad only one chapter to go :(
but you know what they say...'all good things must come to an end'
I really loved this chapter!
7/22/2008 c2 6concerto49
I anticipated that you'd skip some years as the summary suggested, but never thought it'd be that many :) I admit I have issues writing this type of content because my mind would go a bit out of control, but you seem to manage it pretty well. The comment I have is more sentence variation and how you started sentences - try to make everything connect a flow more nicely. It's surely a fun idea to write about, if you consider the main character yourself. You'd half feel a bit guilty yet wanting to continue.
6concerto49I anticipated that you'd skip some years as the summary suggested, but never thought it'd be that many :) I admit I have issues writing this type of content because my mind would go a bit out of control, but you seem to manage it pretty well. The comment I have is more sentence variation and how you started sentences - try to make everything connect a flow more nicely. It's surely a fun idea to write about, if you consider the main character yourself. You'd half feel a bit guilty yet wanting to continue.
7/22/2008 c12 brokencrystal7
i wasnt expecting her to be pregnant but i really do like this chapter. i do hope they get married soon! i cant wait so update soon ^-^
i wasnt expecting her to be pregnant but i really do like this chapter. i do hope they get married soon! i cant wait so update soon ^-^