for Secret Affair5/11/2008 c4 
4rocknrosebubbles
i hav just started reading this and i gotta say it is pretty good :) just a few speling mistakes here and there but other than that it is good
4rocknrosebubblesi hav just started reading this and i gotta say it is pretty good :) just a few speling mistakes here and there but other than that it is good
5/9/2008 c4 LostinLov3
the being jealous over an icecream cone was funny, lol. they're so hot for each other. why didnt he just break it off with the sister so long ago?
the being jealous over an icecream cone was funny, lol. they're so hot for each other. why didnt he just break it off with the sister so long ago?
5/9/2008 c4 Ninavs
I hate cheating bastards...but Damn they are soo hot together!lol
But..is it just sex...or its something else?
I hate cheating bastards...but Damn they are soo hot together!lol
But..is it just sex...or its something else?
4/29/2008 c3 starburst19
the 1st sentence did not fit for me but other than that every thing was great . update soon
the 1st sentence did not fit for me but other than that every thing was great . update soon
4/26/2008 c2 starburst19
loved it. hey wanna hear something odd my siblings are triplets and there 2 girl and a boy and ther only six now but i could so see the acting like the ones in your story
loved it. hey wanna hear something odd my siblings are triplets and there 2 girl and a boy and ther only six now but i could so see the acting like the ones in your story
4/25/2008 c1 Xiaolu
Wow, the last scene was kinda hot. Amazingly well written. I think you should continue because I'm curious. It's just about sex with her? I'm really wondering if Zac is playing her and if he does like her just a bit.
Wow, the last scene was kinda hot. Amazingly well written. I think you should continue because I'm curious. It's just about sex with her? I'm really wondering if Zac is playing her and if he does like her just a bit.
4/24/2008 c1 starburst19
you have to cont this story has some good drama in it . i hope you post the next chap soon ill be waiting
you have to cont this story has some good drama in it . i hope you post the next chap soon ill be waiting