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7/9/2009 c30 20Chasmodai Blue
WHAT? It's almost over and they're...arrested and that's so not alright. Well maybe it is. I just wish it weren't.

It was such a scary chapter. Nerve wracking. I totally checked to see if this were the last chapter because then I would have stopped thinking they had DIED.

Apparently not.

I can wait for the end. I can wait forever. Feel free to make stuff happen between then and now.

/love
7/9/2009 c30 5bronsautracks
haha!

take that jesse jones!

he IS cia!

for the record, i love this story. :)
7/9/2009 c30 45TopKat
oh, god, last chapter!

I don't know what i'll do!

Nate was a fucking psycho to do what he did (poor jesse), but i can't say i blame him. Frankie, you bastard! And for merchandise, too... little shit!

liked the prison scene, for obvious reasons. Gasped out loud when Jesse got pushed underwater (if he died i don't think i'd ever get over it) - CRISLER IS WITH THE CIA. never doubted it for a second, especially after the whole "tell me where it is" escapade. I'm desperately hoping everything can be solved and hunky dory in one chapter, but I'm worried it won't happen! ft

i might read this again. it wouldn't be the first time i'd chosen this over sleep, but i think i'll wait for the next chapter, so i can read it all again, in full. I dont know what it is: this story gets inside my head! everything about it is just. ugh. everything about it makes me write incredibly long grovelly reviews :D

anyway, I love it as usual, i'm seriously pissed at willie (err, chick with a dick - did he forget that?), and i'm desperate for the last chapter (but dreading it, too!).
7/9/2009 c30 cocorolla
*whimper* The next Chapter is the last T~T?

Well, It's a lovely story none the less! :D Great job. ^-^

It makes me laugh at how crazy Nate went over the whole ordeal, I would have done the same. Just snapped, and ruin some lives. :DD Jesses has a right to be pissed off beyond recognition though. :/

D: Scary CIA man... Cant wait for next chapter. ^^
7/9/2009 c30 MAGICAL.NARRATOR
I love this story so much and as sad as i am that its ending, I'm excited as hell to see how it'll all go down.

I fckin love Jesse Jones with his Jesse-glare and his eye smiles and his random spurts of affection he shows Nate at the exact right time.

Nate is an awesome narrator. I really couldn't imagine the story told from any other characters perspective and im so happy you didn't switch back and forth.
7/9/2009 c30 PA
the dominant words going through my head as i read this chpter was probably "what the fuck. whatthefuckwhatthefuck." Just thinking was way out of the question.

the CIA thing really being real? ahahahahaahahaha i love it. couldn't help myself from bursting into laughs, which of course promptly stopped whn i read that next chapter is gonna be the last chapter whatthefuck NO! i guess we should've seen it coming though, what with the last few chapters taking a drastic turn from the regular flow and all. but no :( this just seemed like it'll go on forever and ever and it's so sad to think that i won't be able to constantly check back for an update anymore :(. i don't think it needs to be said, but you've done a more than fantastic job throughout, and i'm so incredibly glad i chanced upon this. i will now chalk up every potential dream guy i meet as a Nate.

and wow, again with the -whatthefuck- unpredictability factor with Willy being pseudo-evil :o. yeah i kept on taking for granted that him and Nate would tag team to beat everyone else up, but that would've been half the fun, ey? ;)

and Jesse mentioning Nate's eyes aaw! Jesse's feelings have always seemed a bit skeptical yeah, but that really is too adorable.

arghh i'll be eagerly and impatiently waiting for the next chapter. with dread or hope, i haven't quite decided yet ;)
7/9/2009 c30 7Sunshine Bear
I LOVE Jesse Jones.

You can't CAP his name because he is Jesse Jones.

Jesse almost made me stop believeing that Crisler wasn't CIA. ALMOST! But I was along side Nate in believing.

I knew he was CIA. I just knew it.
7/9/2009 c30 2MisterScotty
that sure was action packed!

I hope this turns out well..
7/9/2009 c30 kepteinen
Ryan Smith? Way to stick out in a crowd.
7/7/2009 c6 2Atlantis Forester
This story is great. I've never said this outright about anything on FP before, but I have to here: Jesse tackling Nate was seriously hot.
7/5/2009 c29 1debzzz
Whoa...Did Crisler take his money? I really doubt that he was actually after Nate's chip, I guess Nate refuses to believe that Crisler simply thought that Svyatoslav was a spy of sorts. Anyway, this was a cool chapter! I always laugh with Syphillis Girl and Boy, their discriptions from Nate are hilariously disgusting! And I think I'm gonna miss Svyatoslav the Russian grocer...I can't wait for the next update! cheers
7/3/2009 c29 narcissistic
oh shit.. his money's gone? hm maybe his mom took it. she didnt seem to take it to well when he said he was going to leave... i hope they find it soon.
7/3/2009 c29 StarAndStickerTape
I LOVE hoe Jesse comes to Nates Rescue! Very sexxy! I can't belive all his life savings is gone! omg i bet crisler took it! that ass. oh well i trust nate and jesse will figure out what to do. I knew they coulden't leave just yet ;)
7/2/2009 c29 HazeleyedHoney
He should just sell the store that the Russian left to him. Great chapter. Update as soon as you can.
7/2/2009 c29 Troove
Omg AH no, why?

I bet Crisler is getting pissed off at Nates game, and decided to play with him too, via stealing the money and trading it for the satellite. But, ahk, wtf, I'm so sad, it was almost perfect. D:

Or maybe his mum took it, not wanting him to leave and pulling the "But sweety, he left his shop to you~" ! What if she used to money to fix the shop up? That'd be terrible.

Well, If Nate does somehow manage to leave, I wonder who he'll leave the shop to...
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