7/19/2008 c1 knits alot
I love this story. I've actually read it all so far, I guess that leaves me 4 more chances to tell you how much I've enjoyed reading it.
I love this story. I've actually read it all so far, I guess that leaves me 4 more chances to tell you how much I've enjoyed reading it.
7/18/2008 c5 4X-core
I'm back, I wish I had a reason for not reviewing 3 or 4 but I don't really, I know I suck.
I'm really glad you're focussing on the Nate/Jesse relationship because that is by far the best thing about this story. I’m practically screaming at the screen for them to stop messing around get it on already here, but that's a good thing. The relationship is building up at a good pace.
X-core
I'm back, I wish I had a reason for not reviewing 3 or 4 but I don't really, I know I suck.
I'm really glad you're focussing on the Nate/Jesse relationship because that is by far the best thing about this story. I’m practically screaming at the screen for them to stop messing around get it on already here, but that's a good thing. The relationship is building up at a good pace.
X-core
7/16/2008 c5 2amphi
I'm really liking this story so far.
You do have the feel of a small rural town portrayed well. I spent more time than I care to dwell on in a tiny rural town in Iowa, so I know exactly what it's like. The little town I lived in even had a miniature grocery store with a soda fountain and ice ceam. I moved there with my father after having spent the first 11 years in the city, so I can kind of empathize with both sides of the story.
About the only thing I can really say would be missing from your town is that everybody would be asking Nate if there was something wrong with his truck if he didn't drive it for a few days. Other wise it's accurate to the point that it makes me twitch and remember why I no longer live in a small rural town. Fortunatly the rest of the story is good enough to keep me reading it. I look forward to continuing to read it as the story unfolds.
I'm really liking this story so far.
You do have the feel of a small rural town portrayed well. I spent more time than I care to dwell on in a tiny rural town in Iowa, so I know exactly what it's like. The little town I lived in even had a miniature grocery store with a soda fountain and ice ceam. I moved there with my father after having spent the first 11 years in the city, so I can kind of empathize with both sides of the story.
About the only thing I can really say would be missing from your town is that everybody would be asking Nate if there was something wrong with his truck if he didn't drive it for a few days. Other wise it's accurate to the point that it makes me twitch and remember why I no longer live in a small rural town. Fortunatly the rest of the story is good enough to keep me reading it. I look forward to continuing to read it as the story unfolds.
7/16/2008 c5 45TopKat
Can't WAIT for the next chapter on this one! So far, i like the not-so-obvious storyline, Jesse and Nate (personality-wise), the ambiguity of Jesse's character, their parents, their habits...just the little details. So much good reading.
Can't WAIT for the next chapter on this one! So far, i like the not-so-obvious storyline, Jesse and Nate (personality-wise), the ambiguity of Jesse's character, their parents, their habits...just the little details. So much good reading.
7/11/2008 c3 Essie
i love the witty humour through nate's idiocy. it makes him more of a flaming mancake. heh i mean, smart hot jock? no thanks. give me a dumb jock anyday and anyway, isn't it a part of their charm? i want me the authentic stuff.
pls continue. it's a damn crazy story. =)
i love the witty humour through nate's idiocy. it makes him more of a flaming mancake. heh i mean, smart hot jock? no thanks. give me a dumb jock anyday and anyway, isn't it a part of their charm? i want me the authentic stuff.
pls continue. it's a damn crazy story. =)
6/27/2008 c5 7Sunshine Bear
I want to be a Wal-Mart greeter too! Like it is a dream of mine. When ever I see the old lady that wear way to much dark make-up, I always say, "That is want I want to grow up to me."
Old people get away with so much things. I bet they could kill someone and we would just brush it off with them being old.
I love Jesse.
Goodness yes.
I want to be a Wal-Mart greeter too! Like it is a dream of mine. When ever I see the old lady that wear way to much dark make-up, I always say, "That is want I want to grow up to me."
Old people get away with so much things. I bet they could kill someone and we would just brush it off with them being old.
I love Jesse.
Goodness yes.
6/27/2008 c5 PatchouliPatchwork
I have to say, I really, really love your writing style. ): It's one of the best I've read so far. I pretty much enjoy anything you put out because it's such a good read. XD
Anyways, onto the material. _ The drama thickens even more. Is he gay or is he not? :3 And how does Jesse feel about him? So many questions. I can't wait T-T
I have to say, I really, really love your writing style. ): It's one of the best I've read so far. I pretty much enjoy anything you put out because it's such a good read. XD
Anyways, onto the material. _ The drama thickens even more. Is he gay or is he not? :3 And how does Jesse feel about him? So many questions. I can't wait T-T
6/26/2008 c5 17Cattails
Oh, I sense progress on the Jesse Jones front! And the Nate front :P They're so cute together. Oh, and that last bit was interesting...he is SO hinting! XD Looking forward to the next chapter!
Oh, I sense progress on the Jesse Jones front! And the Nate front :P They're so cute together. Oh, and that last bit was interesting...he is SO hinting! XD Looking forward to the next chapter!
6/26/2008 c5 1whatisit
i've got to say i loved that conversation. and their interactions in general :)
i've got to say i loved that conversation. and their interactions in general :)
6/12/2008 c1 3magGE
I think I love you! Every goddamn story you write is ultimate love! Love this, love you! Feel the love!
I think I love you! Every goddamn story you write is ultimate love! Love this, love you! Feel the love!
6/6/2008 c4 PatchouliPatchwork
I love Nate so much XD His speech is adorable and cracks me up. Like using "uber". I rarely hear it in writing but all the time in real life. :3 I laughed pretty hard.
And is Jesse totally lying? :3 I hope to find out.
I love Nate so much XD His speech is adorable and cracks me up. Like using "uber". I rarely hear it in writing but all the time in real life. :3 I laughed pretty hard.
And is Jesse totally lying? :3 I hope to find out.
6/6/2008 c4 7Sunshine Bear
I love this story.
I want to eat it.
And be it's best friend.
And stuff.
I love it.
I love this story.
I want to eat it.
And be it's best friend.
And stuff.
I love it.
6/6/2008 c4 17Cattails
Now THAT is an exciting night. I like the addition of the rock. And the yeti cry. Especially the yeti cry. Oh, wow, Nate must be blind. Seriously. And poor Jesse...he tries... O_o Alright, I can see why Nate is banned form playing baseball. Wow. Pft, that "beau" thing was cute, too XD He's so oblivious. But, hey, at least they get to spend a few hours together! Yay! XD Looking forward to more!
Now THAT is an exciting night. I like the addition of the rock. And the yeti cry. Especially the yeti cry. Oh, wow, Nate must be blind. Seriously. And poor Jesse...he tries... O_o Alright, I can see why Nate is banned form playing baseball. Wow. Pft, that "beau" thing was cute, too XD He's so oblivious. But, hey, at least they get to spend a few hours together! Yay! XD Looking forward to more!