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1/28/2011 c26 LolBookWorm
Why'd you stop at such a cliffhanger? Please write more soon
7/1/2009 c5 6June's vampire
I loved this chapter it made me really want to read the rest.
6/29/2009 c3 1artificial destiny
aw. even though the chapters are short, you really give a lot of depth into each character

awsum :)
6/29/2009 c1 artificial destiny
nice intro! cant wait to read the rest :)
5/30/2009 c26 benzene
Despicable. I can't believe you left with a cliff hanger. It's been a while since your last update. Is this story on hiatus?
4/16/2009 c26 clairey
Really liking the story...update soon :D
3/16/2009 c26 3The Beauty of Lies
loved it ^^ update soon plz =P
1/10/2009 c26 Maria
Hurry up and update! This is a cool story! !
12/31/2008 c26 21Faith Adeline
Good, except some of the diologue doesn't really flow. For one thing, he's been around for a while, so his diologue is going to be, while modern, a bit refined. A vampire probably wouldn't say, "This whole dating thing is new to me," at least not in that way. Also, when you state a name, such as, "Look, Layla," you need the comma. For anything that's supposed to be a name, even a pet name, you need that comma before it. That's about it. Keep it up :)

Faith
12/26/2008 c26 AndItMovesUsAll
I really liked it, buty now im dying to know what happens next!
12/25/2008 c26 2Silly-girl15
I love this chapter. Conflict...
12/24/2008 c26 1lostlotus
Intersting chapter
12/23/2008 c26 freak4hitsugaya
that was a really amazing chapter! please update soon! i have waited forever for this chapter!
12/23/2008 c26 pinkeclipse
she cant have kids with him?
12/16/2008 c25 10Sabreal
Please update soon.

x

You have a faithful reader in me =D
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