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4/26/2008 c2 21Faith Adeline
I liked it. Just remember you can combine words, like I will to I'll. People don't really say I will anymore. Combining them will make the diologue more realistic and it'll flow better. Keep it up and update soon :)

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4/26/2008 c2 12Alice B. Black
I truely do love everything you write dear, and I'll try to write reviews often. I'm very happy to say that I stumbled upon your account today when I encountered some down time, and now I've been trying to read everything I haven't. I do like a Maid's Tail very much, my only wish is that it didn't seem to drag out as much; yet my opinion can't hardly be accepted since I'm one to read the last few pages of a book first. But with this story, I do hope that the two that are destined for each other get to me soon. I will love to see how they interact. Very good first two chapters already.
4/26/2008 c1 serendipity90
wow, it certainly is an interesting start - do update soon im sure everyones itching to read the next chappy :)
4/25/2008 c1 21Faith Adeline
Hmm...this has potential. I like it :) Keep it up and update soon!

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4/25/2008 c1 989East-0f-Eden
Very interesting. I'll have to keep checking it on Quizilla too.~wildflowerblue ;)
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