for The Prerogatives of Fate8/30/2008 c23 
21rosieroo
wat? cliffhanger? NOO! how does arlan/beastie react? ahh!
also, in one of the previous chapters, you said he was 450 years old, yet near the beginning, you said he slept for 3-4 centuries!
...im confused, does that mean he was alive 50ish years b4 he fell asleep?
anyway, please update soon! its great!
21rosieroowat? cliffhanger? NOO! how does arlan/beastie react? ahh!
also, in one of the previous chapters, you said he was 450 years old, yet near the beginning, you said he slept for 3-4 centuries!
...im confused, does that mean he was alive 50ish years b4 he fell asleep?
anyway, please update soon! its great!
8/18/2008 c23 1SNB
Great update. I really hope that she gets though to Arlan. You did a wonderful job!
1SNBGreat update. I really hope that she gets though to Arlan. You did a wonderful job!
8/18/2008 c23 21Faith Adeline
Hmm...I would've like to have seen more on his transformation, seeing as how it's such a big part of him. How it feels to turn from one form to another. That may be just me though. The end was a bit...eh. More soap opera :) ha. But I liked it. Keep it up!
Faith
21Faith AdelineHmm...I would've like to have seen more on his transformation, seeing as how it's such a big part of him. How it feels to turn from one form to another. That may be just me though. The end was a bit...eh. More soap opera :) ha. But I liked it. Keep it up!
Faith
8/17/2008 c19 17Susurrent Threnody
"Catreena smiled a toothy grin as she knew her brother liked to hide alone so he could widdle small gifts for their neighbor, Jesabelle." - You mean 'whittle'. 'Widdle' tends to mean something entirely different.
This is pretty good. I like how he isn't dependent on blood anymore, it's a nice change from the usual bloodthirsty vsmpire.
17Susurrent Threnody"Catreena smiled a toothy grin as she knew her brother liked to hide alone so he could widdle small gifts for their neighbor, Jesabelle." - You mean 'whittle'. 'Widdle' tends to mean something entirely different.
This is pretty good. I like how he isn't dependent on blood anymore, it's a nice change from the usual bloodthirsty vsmpire.