for The Prerogatives of Fate6/19/2008 c1 No Name 7429035
I don't know why I giggle when I hear the word 'belly' but I do lol. she's plugging her nose, is she a vampire and wants to eat the taxi driver? Ha ha! Eat em! Then stuff the body in the trunk. Unless taxi's don't have trunks. . . well then she's just shit out of luck. lol. Ah, and so early in the morning, no need to worry about witnesses! lol how tempting for her. It annoys me when Taxi drivers talk to you too, but that's just cause I'm not a talker in the car, I just listen to music and enjoy the ride lol.
I wouldn't return calls from an unknown number either! Some random dude called my house once before at THREE AM and I was like 'I don't know you. . . night' but then he just kept talking until I finally hung up then he called back and I looked at my cousin and was like 'don't answer it. . . T.T'
Ah, is Karl the obsessive stalker ex? lol those are always amusing.
Nice chapter.
Ja ne!
I don't know why I giggle when I hear the word 'belly' but I do lol. she's plugging her nose, is she a vampire and wants to eat the taxi driver? Ha ha! Eat em! Then stuff the body in the trunk. Unless taxi's don't have trunks. . . well then she's just shit out of luck. lol. Ah, and so early in the morning, no need to worry about witnesses! lol how tempting for her. It annoys me when Taxi drivers talk to you too, but that's just cause I'm not a talker in the car, I just listen to music and enjoy the ride lol.
I wouldn't return calls from an unknown number either! Some random dude called my house once before at THREE AM and I was like 'I don't know you. . . night' but then he just kept talking until I finally hung up then he called back and I looked at my cousin and was like 'don't answer it. . . T.T'
Ah, is Karl the obsessive stalker ex? lol those are always amusing.
Nice chapter.
Ja ne!
6/10/2008 c16 
21Faith Adeline
hmm, again, this isn't my favorite chapter. It's odd how she just instantly thinks, Oh it's Karl! He hired a hitman! Instead of just thinking it was a mugger or something. Je ne sais pas. . .Update soon.
Faith
21Faith Adelinehmm, again, this isn't my favorite chapter. It's odd how she just instantly thinks, Oh it's Karl! He hired a hitman! Instead of just thinking it was a mugger or something. Je ne sais pas. . .Update soon.
Faith
6/9/2008 c15 East-0f-Eden
Lulu I LOVED that ending. It has so much potential! I can't wait to see what you do with it! I think you have great characters in this too.
Lulu I LOVED that ending. It has so much potential! I can't wait to see what you do with it! I think you have great characters in this too.
6/9/2008 c15 1SPHINXy
Finally she knows the truth! Or at least part of it...Can't wait to see if she accepts it.
1SPHINXyFinally she knows the truth! Or at least part of it...Can't wait to see if she accepts it.
6/8/2008 c15 21Faith Adeline
Eh...This was an okay chapter. Sort of soap-operaish. Also, you don't want to use etc. Spell it out, or just don't use it. It just doesn't look very "professional." And another thing, thoughts are in italics, with no ' '. Anyways...Keep it up.
Faith
21Faith AdelineEh...This was an okay chapter. Sort of soap-operaish. Also, you don't want to use etc. Spell it out, or just don't use it. It just doesn't look very "professional." And another thing, thoughts are in italics, with no ' '. Anyways...Keep it up.
Faith