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6/8/2008 c15 pinkeclipse
she has a few phone calls to make...what will karl do when he finds out his plan didnt work?
6/5/2008 c14 989East-0f-Eden
i thought the last part was a little freaky but i really like Arlan trying to supress his inner beast. this is one of the few times you've given such dialouge to a vampire and I LOVE IT.
6/5/2008 c14 2Silly-girl15
Yeah! :)
6/5/2008 c14 8Annabel Wynters
and how long is he going to sleep? Great wonderful Chapter!
6/4/2008 c14 pinkeclipse
i hope they finally have time to talk and set things strait!
6/4/2008 c13 Annabel Wynters
but what about Nina? Great chapter!
6/4/2008 c13 2Silly-girl15
good chap!
6/3/2008 c13 pinkeclipse
what about nina?
6/3/2008 c13 21Faith Adeline
Good chapter. The diologue still isn't flowing that well, so work on that. Update soon.

Faith
6/2/2008 c12 989East-0f-Eden
i thought this chapter was exceptional. I espcially loved the 1st part where he struggles with his inner best. that was great.
6/2/2008 c12 2Silly-girl15
like the chap!
6/2/2008 c12 21Faith Adeline
good chapter. I find it a bit funny he hired a hit man. It's so soap opera-ish haha. keep it up and update soon!

Faith
6/2/2008 c12 8Annabel Wynters
Dun Dun Dun! ick I don't like Karl, I wish nothing but bad juju on him! haha
6/2/2008 c12 Lyra Waterflame
Ouch! Ok, Karl was a jerk before, but now he's just down right creepy!

Please write more soon? More with Layla and Arlan? Please?
6/1/2008 c12 pinkeclipse
like arlan would let that happen?
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