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6/1/2008 c11 PrickleyPear
AH! Karl needs to die!

I would give you critique but I really can't think of anything.
5/30/2008 c11 2Silly-girl15
good chap!
5/30/2008 c11 8Annabel Wynters
ok, can I kill Karl now or do I have to wait till later? sorry...Karl is an offical ass. Great chapter though!
5/29/2008 c11 21Faith Adeline
hmm, what a freak. haha. Although, I wouldn't think they'd be meeting at the cop shop, they'd go to his office. Because she isn't the one being charged with anything, so they wouldn't need to go to the interregation room or anything. Anyways, keep it up.

Faith
5/29/2008 c11 pinkeclipse
he's back! is arlan watching over her and protecting her?
5/29/2008 c11 989East-0f-Eden
great place to end that chapter. I do feel like I want to know more about Arlan. I don't know very much. I'd liked to see him develop more.
5/15/2008 c10 East-0f-Eden
hey you can't end it there. this is your best story yet! I WANT TO Know what happens. I have to leave tomorrow! great story
5/14/2008 c10 2Silly-girl15
Good chapter!
5/14/2008 c10 8Annabel Wynters
AWW! Really sweet chapter!
5/13/2008 c10 21Faith Adeline
hmm. This wasn't my favorite chapter. I think that it's going by a bit fast. Just me. Plus, remember that each new speaker gets their own paragraph. So the boy will have his own, and the mom will have her own. Keep it up and update soon.

Faith
5/13/2008 c10 pinkeclipse
i read this as soon as i saw it on my email! so they are finally together! hope karl doesnt come in for he will be in for a surprise!
5/11/2008 c9 2Silly-girl15
Good storie!
5/10/2008 c9 8Annabel Wynters
aww! It's a really cute story goin' so far! Keep up the goos writing!
5/9/2008 c9 Lyra Waterflame
Aw! Layla and Arlan are just so cute! Please write more soon?
5/9/2008 c9 989East-0f-Eden
I think this is turning out to be one of your best stories yet.
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