for On a Certain Something7/21/2008 c1 
102The Hippie Nerd
Short, but sweet! The repeated use of "It's beautiful" is really well done, just enough to be effective but not overdone. The 2 parts in between are very descriptive and vivid, I really like them both, but especially the second one. Quite poetic, and you manage to say a lot in just a few lines. Well done!
102The Hippie NerdShort, but sweet! The repeated use of "It's beautiful" is really well done, just enough to be effective but not overdone. The 2 parts in between are very descriptive and vivid, I really like them both, but especially the second one. Quite poetic, and you manage to say a lot in just a few lines. Well done!