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12/15/2013 c1 1achu12
that was so sad but so inspirational.
7/3/2008 c1 Lusterless Moon
wow...that's really good. i love the last line so MUCH!

"She was an angel. But even angels fall"

Brilliant! its so true, that people who need help almost never get it. Even if they are crying desprately for it. I like how this fic puts that into light, for all to read.

Only constructive critism i have is that you could make the narrator elaborate and wallow more in her guilt and sorrow about her friend committing suicide and how she wasnt there for her. Other than that,great job! :D
4/26/2008 c1 5Radioactive Jeans
This is an absolutely beautiful story. Sad, but beautiful. I won't really say that I'm an angel, but I know what her dead friend felt.

Good job!
4/26/2008 c1 6SilentSongs
This story is so heartbreaking. The end is particularly powerful. It might add something to it if the narrator showed more guilt that she couldn't have been there for her friend.

~SilentSongs~
4/26/2008 c1 Shatter the Silence
Aw...This made me tear up a bit. I liked it! Good job!

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