7/23/2008 c1 13dancin-in-the-rain
Woah. That was so... intense. Your way with words is extremely powerful, and I can't imagine... woah. The sad thing is that there are moments like that which happen every day. It hurts to think about, but it's true. Way to go-not only for challenging everyone who reads this to reevalute their lives, but also for making so many points. Amazing.
Woah. That was so... intense. Your way with words is extremely powerful, and I can't imagine... woah. The sad thing is that there are moments like that which happen every day. It hurts to think about, but it's true. Way to go-not only for challenging everyone who reads this to reevalute their lives, but also for making so many points. Amazing.
4/27/2008 c1 stick
That was fucking powerful. To say the least.
I'm completely failing at words for this review, but this story really was a sort of reality check. Everyone makes jokes at other people's expense, but when is it too much?
We really have to check ourselves, or we'll become something like this. Dead, and knowing we deserved it. What a sad way to go out, regretting everything about your life and knowing you deserved your death. The only thing you can hope is that other people will take your death as a warning. I know I don't want to die like that.
I don't know if you were trying to send a message, but I think it was really interesting, it was dark, it was powerful, it was good.
That was fucking powerful. To say the least.
I'm completely failing at words for this review, but this story really was a sort of reality check. Everyone makes jokes at other people's expense, but when is it too much?
We really have to check ourselves, or we'll become something like this. Dead, and knowing we deserved it. What a sad way to go out, regretting everything about your life and knowing you deserved your death. The only thing you can hope is that other people will take your death as a warning. I know I don't want to die like that.
I don't know if you were trying to send a message, but I think it was really interesting, it was dark, it was powerful, it was good.