
10/5/2016 c11 Namekemex
Its makin sense. thanks
Its makin sense. thanks
1/18/2014 c7 gracesaada
I feel like Em should have been made older.. sixteen is too young. Will should have been made at least twenty two and made to act more mature- at the beginning he seemed a bit too childish for my liking
I feel like Em should have been made older.. sixteen is too young. Will should have been made at least twenty two and made to act more mature- at the beginning he seemed a bit too childish for my liking
5/5/2012 c1 LikeAppleLove
Read before but didn't leave a reviw so here is...this story was sweet and original loved it and the chapter's being songs were awesome. I hope you continue writing brillant stories!
Read before but didn't leave a reviw so here is...this story was sweet and original loved it and the chapter's being songs were awesome. I hope you continue writing brillant stories!
1/22/2012 c3
4HayleeBailey
This story is so funny! It cracks me up and i have a very... im hard to make laugh, lets just say that. Awsome story! and i dont even LIKE vampires!

This story is so funny! It cracks me up and i have a very... im hard to make laugh, lets just say that. Awsome story! and i dont even LIKE vampires!
1/19/2012 c4
3tye-dye eyes 191
I am not sure if we are ment to like her but I seriously cannot stand Emilie. She is a bitch who thinks she get whatever she wants. I will keep reading because I read the first one, The Thin Line and I liked it a lot. I hope that she gets a better personality. If I was Will I wouldn't want her either.

I am not sure if we are ment to like her but I seriously cannot stand Emilie. She is a bitch who thinks she get whatever she wants. I will keep reading because I read the first one, The Thin Line and I liked it a lot. I hope that she gets a better personality. If I was Will I wouldn't want her either.
12/2/2011 c20
4TheLonelyShe-Wolf
love this story just like the first one. im really looking forward to reading the next one. thumbs up =]

love this story just like the first one. im really looking forward to reading the next one. thumbs up =]
6/15/2011 c1 violet.castle
What happened to the story before this? Where there was just Marina and Tristan?
What happened to the story before this? Where there was just Marina and Tristan?
5/15/2011 c13 CrazyInAGoodWay
hey near the top you said : "My father would know something is wrong. He says he won't call but I know he will; he loves me." Cady yelled, her voice becoming hoarse. "You think Henry will view you as his equal? He doesn't even love you! You may be his mate but anything humane he felt before went out the window when he began killing his own kind! He's an animal and you'll be nothing more than that."
I think you might have meant Em was speaking, not Cady. Just thought I would make sure you knew :) love this series btw haha i've read it like 4 times and this was bothering me so i decided to finally tell you hahah :)
hey near the top you said : "My father would know something is wrong. He says he won't call but I know he will; he loves me." Cady yelled, her voice becoming hoarse. "You think Henry will view you as his equal? He doesn't even love you! You may be his mate but anything humane he felt before went out the window when he began killing his own kind! He's an animal and you'll be nothing more than that."
I think you might have meant Em was speaking, not Cady. Just thought I would make sure you knew :) love this series btw haha i've read it like 4 times and this was bothering me so i decided to finally tell you hahah :)
4/30/2011 c20
1TheLastFireBender
OMFG! AWESOME STORY SERIOUSLY THE LAST CHAPTER WAS A TAD BIT DISTURBING LOL I STOPPED READING IN THE STARTING CUZ I GOT SCARED ND JUST SCROLLED DOWN TO REVIEW I NOE IM A WIMP NY WAYS THIS SHOULD GET PUBLISHED CUZ IT IS RLLI GUD NY THX FOR UPDATING :P XOXO

OMFG! AWESOME STORY SERIOUSLY THE LAST CHAPTER WAS A TAD BIT DISTURBING LOL I STOPPED READING IN THE STARTING CUZ I GOT SCARED ND JUST SCROLLED DOWN TO REVIEW I NOE IM A WIMP NY WAYS THIS SHOULD GET PUBLISHED CUZ IT IS RLLI GUD NY THX FOR UPDATING :P XOXO