for Ginger Beer10/4/2013 c10 I 3 ginger beer
Hey
Jake is so adorable. This chapter rocks so does this story :D!
Xoxoxo
Hey
Jake is so adorable. This chapter rocks so does this story :D!
Xoxoxo
10/1/2013 c20 
11Daisyflower
A life journey, both to you as well as the characters. Thanks for sharing it with us. _
The story is brilliant. It has got some weird turns, but it adds up nicely, and the characters are to die for.
I am missing something from this epilogue though... Can you guess? _
Epilogue for the other importants. Please let us know how it went with Ren, and with Shane's father. You made them important, and then, seemingly, tossed them aside. It kind of hurts. Could you? Like, a note, or a short story?
The final selfish request on this tale. O.O
Proud of you either way, for making it, no matter how unreasonably. :P _
11DaisyflowerA life journey, both to you as well as the characters. Thanks for sharing it with us. _
The story is brilliant. It has got some weird turns, but it adds up nicely, and the characters are to die for.
I am missing something from this epilogue though... Can you guess? _
Epilogue for the other importants. Please let us know how it went with Ren, and with Shane's father. You made them important, and then, seemingly, tossed them aside. It kind of hurts. Could you? Like, a note, or a short story?
The final selfish request on this tale. O.O
Proud of you either way, for making it, no matter how unreasonably. :P _
10/1/2013 c15 Daisyflower
...you just broke an unspoken rule yourself...
This had better have a good ending. :P
...you just broke an unspoken rule yourself...
This had better have a good ending. :P
10/1/2013 c13 Daisyflower
It was a daft thing to date a guy like Ren when she already knows something's changing in her, but it happens to be a common mistake. The kiss itself was pretty perfect. :P
Oh, and who on earth goes on a holiday with only the would-be lover a week after you start dating? That's... risky. Stephen King, anyone?
It was a daft thing to date a guy like Ren when she already knows something's changing in her, but it happens to be a common mistake. The kiss itself was pretty perfect. :P
Oh, and who on earth goes on a holiday with only the would-be lover a week after you start dating? That's... risky. Stephen King, anyone?
10/1/2013 c10 Daisyflower
Fav chappie ever *_*
Love that kid
and love swooping... swooping is grand... :DDDDDDD
Fav chappie ever *_*
Love that kid
and love swooping... swooping is grand... :DDDDDDD
10/1/2013 c7 Daisyflower
"My undead bride"? XD
Do you have loads of friends, a wast imagination, or a cultural abundance? YOU have some seriously cool thoughts sometimes... Mosttimes. _-
"My undead bride"? XD
Do you have loads of friends, a wast imagination, or a cultural abundance? YOU have some seriously cool thoughts sometimes... Mosttimes. _-
9/20/2013 c9 Guest
I had to hold back my laughter at the book moment, you do humour well :)
This story is very cliched, but it's promising
I had to hold back my laughter at the book moment, you do humour well :)
This story is very cliched, but it's promising
9/17/2013 c20 Amberwolf23
wow I just found out about this story a few weeks ago and considering you didn't finish it till 20 I would of gone nuts XD
wow I just found out about this story a few weeks ago and considering you didn't finish it till 20 I would of gone nuts XD
9/13/2013 c1 4Lolitroy
I'm not one for romance, but goodness their situation is exactly like my crush and me, except for Ginger Beer o_o
Looking forward for more! But I'm very lazy so don't get surprised if I review three weeks after...
Aaanyway next review will be a proper review! I'm at school right now, so... y'know teachers and their thing against cellphones ;A;
4LolitroyI'm not one for romance, but goodness their situation is exactly like my crush and me, except for Ginger Beer o_o
Looking forward for more! But I'm very lazy so don't get surprised if I review three weeks after...
Aaanyway next review will be a proper review! I'm at school right now, so... y'know teachers and their thing against cellphones ;A;
5/14/2012 c19 Idot
WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER. WEDDING SCENESSSS
WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER. WEDDING SCENESSSS
5/1/2011 c19 TheWonderousWord
Ok. Wow! You HAVE to write another chapter. I NEVER review anything, but I have to tell you to FINISH THIS STORY! It is too amazing to just leave it have finished! PLEASE write another chapter SOON!
Ok. Wow! You HAVE to write another chapter. I NEVER review anything, but I have to tell you to FINISH THIS STORY! It is too amazing to just leave it have finished! PLEASE write another chapter SOON!