for A Sparrow Named Thomis5/1/2008 c1 
4Abel Articulate
Very good story. I thought that it had great characterization, and I really felt like these characters were people that I could know in my own life. Sometimes, I find myself in the same situations is Thomis' situation when it comes to writing stories, and I related to him pretty well. Very well written and had me smiling through some of it as well. Keep up the good work!
4Abel ArticulateVery good story. I thought that it had great characterization, and I really felt like these characters were people that I could know in my own life. Sometimes, I find myself in the same situations is Thomis' situation when it comes to writing stories, and I related to him pretty well. Very well written and had me smiling through some of it as well. Keep up the good work!