1/23/2009 c20 2pretitiful
okay. they have sex, and then she suggests that they break up?
srsly. what is up with that?
&poor brian :(
okay. they have sex, and then she suggests that they break up?
srsly. what is up with that?
&poor brian :(
1/23/2009 c16 pretitiful
mr. deacon. mmh. yeah. i wouldnt want to run into him. actually. i wouldnt want to be on his bad side. does he even have a good side? lol.
loving the story
:)
mr. deacon. mmh. yeah. i wouldnt want to run into him. actually. i wouldnt want to be on his bad side. does he even have a good side? lol.
loving the story
:)
1/21/2009 c23 2Serolina
OH MY GOD! I HATE him! He doesn't even seem to have a clue as to what kind of repercussions this will have on his son's emotional state! They love each other and he's just being a selfish MEANIEFACE.
*breaths*
Now that I have that out of my system, I Love this story! I think you are doing a wonderful job with your writing and I can'rt wait till the next chapter comes out.
...sorry about the angry rant...that man was made to be hated...You did a wonderful job of writing him. ^_^
OH MY GOD! I HATE him! He doesn't even seem to have a clue as to what kind of repercussions this will have on his son's emotional state! They love each other and he's just being a selfish MEANIEFACE.
*breaths*
Now that I have that out of my system, I Love this story! I think you are doing a wonderful job with your writing and I can'rt wait till the next chapter comes out.
...sorry about the angry rant...that man was made to be hated...You did a wonderful job of writing him. ^_^
1/21/2009 c25 2ehM
what the..freak? hehe.
failed communication alright..
wow..all those happened within a year? dang.
what the..freak? hehe.
failed communication alright..
wow..all those happened within a year? dang.
1/21/2009 c25 CluLessOnexD
um.. this book came out a long time ago so i was wondering if part two came out yet...
- a cluless fan
um.. this book came out a long time ago so i was wondering if part two came out yet...
- a cluless fan
1/20/2009 c18 1Esdursayshii
ugh Celeste is a bitch! my aunts are way better! hm... i wonder how levi and celeste have in common? OMG did theyn have an affair? is thty heidi broke up with celeste? oh i have to read the next chpter!
- a cluless fan
ugh Celeste is a bitch! my aunts are way better! hm... i wonder how levi and celeste have in common? OMG did theyn have an affair? is thty heidi broke up with celeste? oh i have to read the next chpter!
- a cluless fan
1/20/2009 c16 Esdursayshii
ooh someones moving! ahh! csnt wait to read the next chapter! this book is so good!
ooh someones moving! ahh! csnt wait to read the next chapter! this book is so good!
1/20/2009 c25 1This.Ink
God i hate that women! WTF is her problem?
I wish they find out soon what shes doing so she can have her butt kick! :/
lol nice chapter. I liked it. :)
xo's
Minxie
God i hate that women! WTF is her problem?
I wish they find out soon what shes doing so she can have her butt kick! :/
lol nice chapter. I liked it. :)
xo's
Minxie
1/20/2009 c25 blushlush
i despise celeste.
poor brian. i love him so much.
i despise celeste.
poor brian. i love him so much.
1/19/2009 c14 1Esdursayshii
OMG! if brian was real i'd be all over him! he is so sweet! i never find that in a guy! x.x hes so unreal! ah he's like another Edward Cullen to other girls, im not such a fan!
OMG! if brian was real i'd be all over him! he is so sweet! i never find that in a guy! x.x hes so unreal! ah he's like another Edward Cullen to other girls, im not such a fan!
1/19/2009 c25 1dabombticktick
DUDE
who is keeping them from contacting?
gr
update asap
i cant wait
:D:D:D
DUDE
who is keeping them from contacting?
gr
update asap
i cant wait
:D:D:D
1/19/2009 c25 30Jainblu
Oh, that is epicly sad... epicly. :(
GOsh I haven't reviewed anything because of my exams.. but i actually liked the change in format. It was quite refreshing actually. I love the type of split scene/ character to character style. Yeah... part two will be fun to read methinks.
Oh, that is epicly sad... epicly. :(
GOsh I haven't reviewed anything because of my exams.. but i actually liked the change in format. It was quite refreshing actually. I love the type of split scene/ character to character style. Yeah... part two will be fun to read methinks.