for Breaking Brian Deacon1/17/2009 c25 
2THPL
aww this is so sad! Why wont his stupid friends just give her the number? It would make everything so much simpler! Poor Brian!
2THPLaww this is so sad! Why wont his stupid friends just give her the number? It would make everything so much simpler! Poor Brian!
1/17/2009 c2 1Esdursayshii
haha tht sweet i wish someone would do tht for me. .
i loved the first chapter and i believe brian's worm mistake. ^.^
- a cluless fan
1Esdursayshiihaha tht sweet i wish someone would do tht for me. .
i loved the first chapter and i believe brian's worm mistake. ^.^
- a cluless fan
1/17/2009 c25 5The Neurotic Notebook
Yay an update! This chapter, while very much appreciated was very Notebook-esque. People are obviously conspiring to keep Brian and Maggie apart... hmm evil! At first I thought that Maggie would get pregnant from the time Brian's dad walked in on them (how embarrassing!).
Waiting anxiously for your next update!
5The Neurotic NotebookYay an update! This chapter, while very much appreciated was very Notebook-esque. People are obviously conspiring to keep Brian and Maggie apart... hmm evil! At first I thought that Maggie would get pregnant from the time Brian's dad walked in on them (how embarrassing!).
Waiting anxiously for your next update!
1/17/2009 c25 RockstarBallerina
okay I am 100% confused I get that celeste has her phone but keeping it that long and she hasnt got it back is just um dumb on Maggie's part anyhow who the hel is taking thier letters Celeste moved out and Brian's dad is on business so is it his mom? or her mom? OMG now I cant wait until you update again, I undewrstand the busy so I wil wait patiently.
okay I am 100% confused I get that celeste has her phone but keeping it that long and she hasnt got it back is just um dumb on Maggie's part anyhow who the hel is taking thier letters Celeste moved out and Brian's dad is on business so is it his mom? or her mom? OMG now I cant wait until you update again, I undewrstand the busy so I wil wait patiently.
1/17/2009 c25 1Izzey
awesome chapter. i like the whole idea. but wouldn't Brian have Maggie's address? or is her mom keeping the letters or something? it's obvious Celeste has her phone. anyways, please update again asap!
1Izzeyawesome chapter. i like the whole idea. but wouldn't Brian have Maggie's address? or is her mom keeping the letters or something? it's obvious Celeste has her phone. anyways, please update again asap!
1/17/2009 c25 4Georgianna
NO!
Ah, this almost made me cry.
Oh Brian and Maggie, how I want you to become one again.
DX
4GeorgiannaNO!
Ah, this almost made me cry.
Oh Brian and Maggie, how I want you to become one again.
DX
1/17/2009 c25 1buffyeesummers
This is so depressing. What the hell is Celeste doing? She kept Maggie's cell phone for that long without giving it back? She has to stop meddling.
I actually really liked this chapter - I think it's a great transition chapter. It nicely summed up what happened between part one and part two (I think?).
Looking forward to when you update next!
1buffyeesummersThis is so depressing. What the hell is Celeste doing? She kept Maggie's cell phone for that long without giving it back? She has to stop meddling.
I actually really liked this chapter - I think it's a great transition chapter. It nicely summed up what happened between part one and part two (I think?).
Looking forward to when you update next!
1/17/2009 c25 5Penn Dalies
Well as different chapters go this was a total 180 from what you usually do. But - it worked REALLY well and I like this style of writing you chose here. ^^
Unfortunately, I'm the kinda person who gets love-sick and is always wishing for a happy ending with no conflict. I know my thinking is just like everybody else's. Generic and Disney. But seriously, this chapter left me in the dumps.
I wouuld usually end my reviews with 'Update soon!' but seeing as your really busy...I mean PHEW...you're BUSY...so whenever you have the time =]
Thanks for the update,
Penn
5Penn DaliesWell as different chapters go this was a total 180 from what you usually do. But - it worked REALLY well and I like this style of writing you chose here. ^^
Unfortunately, I'm the kinda person who gets love-sick and is always wishing for a happy ending with no conflict. I know my thinking is just like everybody else's. Generic and Disney. But seriously, this chapter left me in the dumps.
I wouuld usually end my reviews with 'Update soon!' but seeing as your really busy...I mean PHEW...you're BUSY...so whenever you have the time =]
Thanks for the update,
Penn
1/17/2009 c25 21Faith Adeline
Ugh, whoever is making it so they dont get each other's letters or calls should die. lol. That's so mean! I loved it. So sad :(. I feel bad for both of them. Keep it up and update as soon as you can!
Faith
21Faith AdelineUgh, whoever is making it so they dont get each other's letters or calls should die. lol. That's so mean! I loved it. So sad :(. I feel bad for both of them. Keep it up and update as soon as you can!
Faith
1/17/2009 c25 3I Quoth Nevermore
I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. So sad, and yet I loved the format and the feel and the whole miscommunication thing. Sort of dramatic irony, since we know they're trying to contact each other and yet they don't. So. . . is he putting down the wrong address or is the mum hiding the mail or what? What about email? Anyway, love it. It's really sad, actually. It's a good thing I love me some misery! (In moderation and not in an emo way, of course.) Super excited for part two, so update soon por favor!
3I Quoth NevermoreI thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. So sad, and yet I loved the format and the feel and the whole miscommunication thing. Sort of dramatic irony, since we know they're trying to contact each other and yet they don't. So. . . is he putting down the wrong address or is the mum hiding the mail or what? What about email? Anyway, love it. It's really sad, actually. It's a good thing I love me some misery! (In moderation and not in an emo way, of course.) Super excited for part two, so update soon por favor!
1/17/2009 c25 2RomanceDruggie
so celetse is a fricken bitch...and i hope they get together! pwz if u dont i will cry =C
2RomanceDruggieso celetse is a fricken bitch...and i hope they get together! pwz if u dont i will cry =C
1/17/2009 c25 VickyG
Awee poor Maggie and Brian! :(
I liked the new format with the letters. It was really interesting and I think it fit the story. Ugh I think Celeste and Brian's dad have some schemy business going on so that the letters don't reach B and M. I'm sorry for the busy schedule but I hope things are going well for you! Hopefully an UD as soon as possible :)
Awee poor Maggie and Brian! :(
I liked the new format with the letters. It was really interesting and I think it fit the story. Ugh I think Celeste and Brian's dad have some schemy business going on so that the letters don't reach B and M. I'm sorry for the busy schedule but I hope things are going well for you! Hopefully an UD as soon as possible :)