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12/29/2008 c24 2ehM
heart wrenching..

i cant believe that brian's dad would go through all those lengths jsut so he can break the couple. just because of what celeste did to him? he needs to grow up. :P

i hope they'll get back together. there has to be a happy ending. :D
12/29/2008 c24 2meiilove
OMG no! :'(

how can they break up :O

oh and Happy New Year's :)

and Merry Belated Christmas :)
12/29/2008 c23 meiilove
OMG that bastard!

how could he?

thats like practically ripping your son's heart out...=O
12/28/2008 c24 Sel
Oh wow...

I feel so bad for them.

He cried!

And that poem!

I can't wait for you to start part two.
12/28/2008 c23 Sel
His dad needs professional help.
12/28/2008 c24 Vici Daily
oh no no no no no i cant believe that she actually did that to him? i can't wait until you update! =(
12/28/2008 c24 Emma2Ann12
I Love this story! Keep up the good work! Happy Christmas and New Year!

later!

Em
12/28/2008 c14 Sel
This was perfect!

I love it.
12/28/2008 c24 3Amarantis
Things should work out with them and that father of his should be...argh. I hope everything turns out for the best.
12/28/2008 c24 2ebonydragon
AAH! Iread your entire story in one sitting...wow...(of course I don't have a life!)

I have to say that you are an incredibly awesome amazing wonderful all-powerful author..yes, it's true

Seriously, I will be fervently waiting for part 2

Good luck, and keep writing!
12/27/2008 c24 2Hecate's Diamon
Aww! That's so sad! It reminds me of The Notebook when Aly gets Noah's letters near the end.

I'll be waiting for part two! Great job!
12/27/2008 c2 Sel
This sounds really good so far!
12/27/2008 c24 heavengurl899
ohh...dramatic...but good...you still have a few spelling and grammatical errors but overall it's great!
12/25/2008 c19 heavengurl899
uh wtf? haha that was an interesting twist! seriously I didn't even see that one coming :P
12/25/2008 c1 12Sises
Just finished the story today, and lets just say that I am really glad that there's a part two...I just wish there was some completed progress on it because I hate waiting...

great story, one of the best I've read in a long time. I of course was hoping for a different ending, I mean come on people never man up and go for what they really should...but then the ending wouldn't be nearly the same now would it.

anyways make a long review shoter...excellent story, I'll be keeping an eye open for the next half. Keep it up, the people want more.

-Sises
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