for Breaking Brian Deacon12/22/2008 c24 popcornlove
This makes me want to jump off a cliff!
That was the freaking saddest thing I have ever read Ever!
Ah!
And I hate it when stories have 2 parts cause if the couple breaks up in the first part, they are gonna come back in the second part with either one or both of the people in new relationships and then there has to be all of this drama and sometimes (cheating) to get them back together again. I also hate it cause usually one of the characters come back cold and less emotional...its so annoying and I just wanna stab something in honor of Maggie and Brian because this is a Travesty!
Im crying right now and dying on the inside.
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sorry about the rant I am just highly emotional right now and the fact that I have to go through a whole slew of drama again (not that I dont love your writing cause I really do) makes me hesitant cause I dont know if my emotions can handle the rollercoaster...
Im just so distraught :-(
You did such an amazing job, I couldnt help but invest myself in the story.
This makes me want to jump off a cliff!
That was the freaking saddest thing I have ever read Ever!
Ah!
And I hate it when stories have 2 parts cause if the couple breaks up in the first part, they are gonna come back in the second part with either one or both of the people in new relationships and then there has to be all of this drama and sometimes (cheating) to get them back together again. I also hate it cause usually one of the characters come back cold and less emotional...its so annoying and I just wanna stab something in honor of Maggie and Brian because this is a Travesty!
Im crying right now and dying on the inside.
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sorry about the rant I am just highly emotional right now and the fact that I have to go through a whole slew of drama again (not that I dont love your writing cause I really do) makes me hesitant cause I dont know if my emotions can handle the rollercoaster...
Im just so distraught :-(
You did such an amazing job, I couldnt help but invest myself in the story.
12/22/2008 c24 
1buffyeesummers
Another part? Ahh! How much time will elapse in between part's one and two? I hope not too long.
Poor Brian. And Maggie. Loved the chapter, and I'm looking forward to the next part!
Merry Christmas!
1buffyeesummersAnother part? Ahh! How much time will elapse in between part's one and two? I hope not too long.
Poor Brian. And Maggie. Loved the chapter, and I'm looking forward to the next part!
Merry Christmas!
12/22/2008 c24 Mrs.Cupcake
You made me cry! How could you let this happen?They can not break up... they're meant to be together forever! I mean Brian was crying. Do you have a heart?
I'm kidding. But I did cry when she was telling him they couldn't be together.
I cant wait for more! Happy Holidays!
You made me cry! How could you let this happen?They can not break up... they're meant to be together forever! I mean Brian was crying. Do you have a heart?
I'm kidding. But I did cry when she was telling him they couldn't be together.
I cant wait for more! Happy Holidays!
12/22/2008 c24 3Kcqueen13
Wow, super dramatic conclusion. Really good cliffhanger, though. Can't wait until you continue on to part 2!
By the way, I absolutely love the name Maggie, especially whenever Brian says it. It just sounds so cute!
3Kcqueen13Wow, super dramatic conclusion. Really good cliffhanger, though. Can't wait until you continue on to part 2!
By the way, I absolutely love the name Maggie, especially whenever Brian says it. It just sounds so cute!
12/22/2008 c24 chocolatechipash
omg, well.. shes broken him. poor guy, shes such an idiot. cant wait for the next part!
omg, well.. shes broken him. poor guy, shes such an idiot. cant wait for the next part!
12/22/2008 c24 soliloquoy
No offense, but the ending to that was way to predictable. I knew she would choose to break up with him, and now they are going to be apart and everything will suck but somehow they will be together in the end. I love that happy ending, and I really want it to be like that, but thats a bit too predictable. I would have liked to see what would have happened if she told Brian what his dad told her. I think it would have made the plot more interesting. Instead of the normal: girl and boy fall in love, they break up, they get back together again.
It might just be me, but I wish that Maggie wouldn't be so self righteous and try to "save" Brian the hurt. I hate it when the heroines are so self pitying.
Sorry, that was harsh, but that is the only bad critism I have. Great story :]
No offense, but the ending to that was way to predictable. I knew she would choose to break up with him, and now they are going to be apart and everything will suck but somehow they will be together in the end. I love that happy ending, and I really want it to be like that, but thats a bit too predictable. I would have liked to see what would have happened if she told Brian what his dad told her. I think it would have made the plot more interesting. Instead of the normal: girl and boy fall in love, they break up, they get back together again.
It might just be me, but I wish that Maggie wouldn't be so self righteous and try to "save" Brian the hurt. I hate it when the heroines are so self pitying.
Sorry, that was harsh, but that is the only bad critism I have. Great story :]
12/22/2008 c24 Obsession Changes Things
NO! NO! NO! NO! THAT WAS ALL I WAS THINKING WHILE READING IT I EVEN FELT LIKE STOMPING MY FOOT FOR GOOD MEASURE HOPING IT WOULD HELP BUT ALAS IT DID NOT, I'M SUPPER GRRARR! RIGHT NOW HENCE THE CAPS! BUT I'M SUPPER FRUSTRATED, CAN YOU JUST KILL MR. DEACON OFF? **PLEASE** WITH A CHERRY ON TOP! STILL LOVE THE STORY THOUGH PLEASE UPDATE SOON, A HAPPY UPDATE THOUGH, NOT ANOTHER SAD ONE.
~TEAM BRIAN AND MAGGIE!
~~OBSESSION
NO! NO! NO! NO! THAT WAS ALL I WAS THINKING WHILE READING IT I EVEN FELT LIKE STOMPING MY FOOT FOR GOOD MEASURE HOPING IT WOULD HELP BUT ALAS IT DID NOT, I'M SUPPER GRRARR! RIGHT NOW HENCE THE CAPS! BUT I'M SUPPER FRUSTRATED, CAN YOU JUST KILL MR. DEACON OFF? **PLEASE** WITH A CHERRY ON TOP! STILL LOVE THE STORY THOUGH PLEASE UPDATE SOON, A HAPPY UPDATE THOUGH, NOT ANOTHER SAD ONE.
~TEAM BRIAN AND MAGGIE!
~~OBSESSION
12/22/2008 c24 monkyy109
that was soo sad!
i offically hate mr deacon even more now!
and i cant believe brian let it happen
and mrs deacon!
ugh
the end of part one? :'(
i hope you update soon!:)
that was soo sad!
i offically hate mr deacon even more now!
and i cant believe brian let it happen
and mrs deacon!
ugh
the end of part one? :'(
i hope you update soon!:)
12/22/2008 c24 2RomanceDruggie
When i was reading this i was like damit dammit... I know there gonna be a cliffy and when i saw it i died a little inside =C soo please if you can live with yourself killing a little part of me then dont update. but if u cant UPDATE PLEASE
2RomanceDruggieWhen i was reading this i was like damit dammit... I know there gonna be a cliffy and when i saw it i died a little inside =C soo please if you can live with yourself killing a little part of me then dont update. but if u cant UPDATE PLEASE
12/22/2008 c22 Pro-You
I'm confused. Why is this still rated T?
I mean, you said you'd make it M since they have sex here but then I found this story in the T section. I think you need to change this back to M or else someone will report youu
I'm confused. Why is this still rated T?
I mean, you said you'd make it M since they have sex here but then I found this story in the T section. I think you need to change this back to M or else someone will report youu