12/22/2008 c24 misery sister
SHOULDN'T THIS BE RATED M?
Hahaha woops, sorry i still had caps on from another story i read. Anywayz, didn't you have a sex scene at around Chapter 22 or 21? I think it's in Fictionpress rules that like even just one scnee in an entire story means the story should be rated M...
So yeah, just saying in case someone reports you for mis-Rating or something
good luck wiith the story!
SHOULDN'T THIS BE RATED M?
Hahaha woops, sorry i still had caps on from another story i read. Anywayz, didn't you have a sex scene at around Chapter 22 or 21? I think it's in Fictionpress rules that like even just one scnee in an entire story means the story should be rated M...
So yeah, just saying in case someone reports you for mis-Rating or something
good luck wiith the story!
12/22/2008 c24 crashendingx
Cue heart break. This was definitely a chapter I was dreading :( I like how it's progressing though, can't wait for the next update!
Cue heart break. This was definitely a chapter I was dreading :( I like how it's progressing though, can't wait for the next update!
12/22/2008 c24 7Serafina Claremond
that was awesome, dude. like superb. it was so freaking amazing that i actually cried. just so you know, it takes A LOT for me to cry nowadays. that, that was just...amazing. i loved it and i cannot wait until part two and that oneshot come out. don't rush and just let the writing come to you. :]
i love this story a lot and i love your writing.
♥ Serafina ♥
that was awesome, dude. like superb. it was so freaking amazing that i actually cried. just so you know, it takes A LOT for me to cry nowadays. that, that was just...amazing. i loved it and i cannot wait until part two and that oneshot come out. don't rush and just let the writing come to you. :]
i love this story a lot and i love your writing.
♥ Serafina ♥
12/22/2008 c24 1glamoureste
Oh my fucking God. what the hell?
i'm crying... ah...
update really quickly!
Oh my fucking God. what the hell?
i'm crying... ah...
update really quickly!
12/22/2008 c23 Belladonna08
omg. brian's dad is such an ass! he seriously needs to die and get thrown in a ditch somewhere. great story though. pulled me right in. i've been sitting at my computer for the last forty-five minutes reading non-stop. update soon.
omg. brian's dad is such an ass! he seriously needs to die and get thrown in a ditch somewhere. great story though. pulled me right in. i've been sitting at my computer for the last forty-five minutes reading non-stop. update soon.
12/22/2008 c23 3asya sanami
It really was worth the wait, I'm totally looking forward to reading the end of part one and part two!
It really was worth the wait, I'm totally looking forward to reading the end of part one and part two!
12/22/2008 c23 13Eternity is Calling
Hey sammy,
lovely to hear from you! i have been reading ITWaF, but my nets been so patchy i haven't been able to review. So thanks for the latest Brian chapter! Things are coming to a head indeed, and you're handling the angst well :)
have fun with all your writing on your break. thankyou for another lovely, well written chapter.
xo Liss :)
Hey sammy,
lovely to hear from you! i have been reading ITWaF, but my nets been so patchy i haven't been able to review. So thanks for the latest Brian chapter! Things are coming to a head indeed, and you're handling the angst well :)
have fun with all your writing on your break. thankyou for another lovely, well written chapter.
xo Liss :)
12/21/2008 c23 21Faith Adeline
OMG, that man is evil. He is Satan, seriously. BTW: this line is frickin' epic. "... for a while, I’d thought he didn’t eat anything but babies and souls." Amazing. I cracked up. Keep it up, I can't wait to see what happens next. Poor Maggie and Brian!
Faith
OMG, that man is evil. He is Satan, seriously. BTW: this line is frickin' epic. "... for a while, I’d thought he didn’t eat anything but babies and souls." Amazing. I cracked up. Keep it up, I can't wait to see what happens next. Poor Maggie and Brian!
Faith
12/21/2008 c23 monkyy109
so sad :'(
now they have to break up for reals!
poor brian and maggie
mr deacon is such a...bum!
update soon!
so sad :'(
now they have to break up for reals!
poor brian and maggie
mr deacon is such a...bum!
update soon!
12/21/2008 c23 19toffeecakesxox
-RABID SQUEAL- UPDATE! But an evil update! Ugh, I think I HATE Mr. Deacon more than I did. How Celeste fell in love with him, I have no idea. I nearly started shouting at the computer at that precise paragraph of Mr. Deacon's evilness, but then I realized that I would probably look stupid - yelling at the computer like that. Hehehehe. Anyways, poor Brian! Poor Maggie! I feel so bad for them, now they're going to be SEPARATED! SEPARATED! AGH. EVIL MR. DEACON, EVIL.
Either way, I want to read the next chapter! This is the biggest conflict ever. EVER. Oh my wow.
One of the best stories I've ever read, this is. :)
-toffeecakesxox.
-RABID SQUEAL- UPDATE! But an evil update! Ugh, I think I HATE Mr. Deacon more than I did. How Celeste fell in love with him, I have no idea. I nearly started shouting at the computer at that precise paragraph of Mr. Deacon's evilness, but then I realized that I would probably look stupid - yelling at the computer like that. Hehehehe. Anyways, poor Brian! Poor Maggie! I feel so bad for them, now they're going to be SEPARATED! SEPARATED! AGH. EVIL MR. DEACON, EVIL.
Either way, I want to read the next chapter! This is the biggest conflict ever. EVER. Oh my wow.
One of the best stories I've ever read, this is. :)
-toffeecakesxox.
12/21/2008 c23 1blondiexoxo
wow that is ridiculous!
i hope u update soon
i want to know what happens next!
wow that is ridiculous!
i hope u update soon
i want to know what happens next!
12/21/2008 c23 2Devilish Kisses
What a bastard! How dare he try to seperate Maggie and rian...AGAIN! Asshole! Anyways, by this point, I'm sure you can understand my feelings about mr. deacon. Love this story!
What a bastard! How dare he try to seperate Maggie and rian...AGAIN! Asshole! Anyways, by this point, I'm sure you can understand my feelings about mr. deacon. Love this story!
12/21/2008 c23 GreysAutumn
How could Mr. Deacon do that?
This story is amazing and I really like your writing style. Keep up the great work! :]
How could Mr. Deacon do that?
This story is amazing and I really like your writing style. Keep up the great work! :]
12/20/2008 c23 Obsession Changes Things
Omfg! What an arse whole I can't believe his dad. This Chapter was so sad, I cried! I was so not expecting that to happen! Update soon!
~Obsession
Omfg! What an arse whole I can't believe his dad. This Chapter was so sad, I cried! I was so not expecting that to happen! Update soon!
~Obsession