for Breaking Brian Deacon12/20/2008 c23 crashendingx
I can already tell that the next chapter is going to break my heart. Maggie and Brian are so insanely cute together, the little idealist 11 year old in me wants them to be happy & in love with no problems standing in their way. All in good time I suppose, right?
I can already tell that the next chapter is going to break my heart. Maggie and Brian are so insanely cute together, the little idealist 11 year old in me wants them to be happy & in love with no problems standing in their way. All in good time I suppose, right?
12/20/2008 c23 justthe2ofus
No! =[
I swear to God if Maggie breaks up with him I will jump into my computer screen and personally kill her myself...right after I get Mr. Deacon. She should just tell him exactly whats going on or else Brian is gonna think she doesnt love him or something to that effect.
I Hate Hate Hate Hate Hate Hate Hate Hate Hate Hate Hate Hate Mr. Deacon!
He needs to get in a car wreck!
Love the story...phenomenal show of emotion =]
No! =[
I swear to God if Maggie breaks up with him I will jump into my computer screen and personally kill her myself...right after I get Mr. Deacon. She should just tell him exactly whats going on or else Brian is gonna think she doesnt love him or something to that effect.
I Hate Hate Hate Hate Hate Hate Hate Hate Hate Hate Hate Hate Mr. Deacon!
He needs to get in a car wreck!
Love the story...phenomenal show of emotion =]
12/20/2008 c23 Kjersti
Oh man. Mr. Deacon is extremely horrible. Gawd. Great chapter, but the ending makes me want to smash some heads or sit down in a corner and cry.Can't wait to read more.
Oh man. Mr. Deacon is extremely horrible. Gawd. Great chapter, but the ending makes me want to smash some heads or sit down in a corner and cry.Can't wait to read more.
12/20/2008 c23 
2CynicInLove
you're going to stop part one on their break-up? Do you know how mean that is? Really really really mean. And really you didn't need to do that for your readers to come back for part two because this story is freaking AWESOME. sigh. Stupid angst. Stupid fathers. Stupid maniacal selfish evil self-righteous conniving fathers. Damn it. I'm going to stalk fictionpress for your update. Hopefully Brian will completely ignore Maggie's sacrifice because really it's going to hurt him more than anything else that's been going on. Thirteen years. That's all I can say. please please please update soon! =]
2CynicInLoveyou're going to stop part one on their break-up? Do you know how mean that is? Really really really mean. And really you didn't need to do that for your readers to come back for part two because this story is freaking AWESOME. sigh. Stupid angst. Stupid fathers. Stupid maniacal selfish evil self-righteous conniving fathers. Damn it. I'm going to stalk fictionpress for your update. Hopefully Brian will completely ignore Maggie's sacrifice because really it's going to hurt him more than anything else that's been going on. Thirteen years. That's all I can say. please please please update soon! =]
12/20/2008 c23 mk985
While I agree that karma definitely comes back to bite you in the a$$ (looking at you Maggie lol), I think that Mr D has over-reacted a lot. Even from what we know about his background with Celeste, I don't think it would warrant moving his family away. At this point I am hoping that there is another explanation for his irrational behaviour or that his wife packs her bags and Brian finally stands up to him (though I am guessing for the sake of drama that won't be happening anytime soon :(
While I agree that karma definitely comes back to bite you in the a$$ (looking at you Maggie lol), I think that Mr D has over-reacted a lot. Even from what we know about his background with Celeste, I don't think it would warrant moving his family away. At this point I am hoping that there is another explanation for his irrational behaviour or that his wife packs her bags and Brian finally stands up to him (though I am guessing for the sake of drama that won't be happening anytime soon :(
12/20/2008 c23 oxsarahxo
i am seriously in love with this story!
i really don't want her to break up with brian! aww but i no she will! =[ =[ =[ im going to cry when she does i no it... lol aw i really dont want that to happen!
wo your back! yay i love updates especially when they are random and you dont expect them, i was like YAY when i saw you had updated! made my day haha
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i am seriously in love with this story!
i really don't want her to break up with brian! aww but i no she will! =[ =[ =[ im going to cry when she does i no it... lol aw i really dont want that to happen!
wo your back! yay i love updates especially when they are random and you dont expect them, i was like YAY when i saw you had updated! made my day haha
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12/20/2008 c23 Redenzione
Heya.
OMG. Words cannot describe how much I am not liking Mr Deacon right now. I hope you did well on your finals :D And I can't wait to read more :D
Redenzione
Heya.
OMG. Words cannot describe how much I am not liking Mr Deacon right now. I hope you did well on your finals :D And I can't wait to read more :D
Redenzione
12/20/2008 c23 9Lily Llynn
One thing I saw: "I’d made up this supposedly full-proof plan..." I think it's supposed to be foolproof?
Yes, definitely an angsty chapter. And Mr. Deacon is really quite evil. And I don't mind the wait; completely understandable. (I don't know how I'm still writing after NaNo; I just want to not, haha.) All I can say is I can't wait for the next chapter.
9Lily LlynnOne thing I saw: "I’d made up this supposedly full-proof plan..." I think it's supposed to be foolproof?
Yes, definitely an angsty chapter. And Mr. Deacon is really quite evil. And I don't mind the wait; completely understandable. (I don't know how I'm still writing after NaNo; I just want to not, haha.) All I can say is I can't wait for the next chapter.
12/19/2008 c23 4Morgan Davis
typo:
full-proof is supposed to be fool-proof.
ok well i think it is so gay that mr.deacon is such an ass! it frustrates me to no end. one thing i will say though is that it is slightly unrealistic... his hatred is so adamant... i just don't get it. i guess it is because i have never seen such hate for someone... idk
i am looking forward to more over the break though!
4Morgan Davistypo:
full-proof is supposed to be fool-proof.
ok well i think it is so gay that mr.deacon is such an ass! it frustrates me to no end. one thing i will say though is that it is slightly unrealistic... his hatred is so adamant... i just don't get it. i guess it is because i have never seen such hate for someone... idk
i am looking forward to more over the break though!
12/19/2008 c23 1dabombticktick
...wow
what an ass face!
guh
i cant wait to see how brian takes it
please update soon!
:D:D:D
1dabombticktick...wow
what an ass face!
guh
i cant wait to see how brian takes it
please update soon!
:D:D:D
12/19/2008 c23 4Lorango911
GAH this are getting worse! i didn't think brian's dad would stop so low! gah i'm so nervous! OMG is she going to tell brian what his father told her?
4Lorango911GAH this are getting worse! i didn't think brian's dad would stop so low! gah i'm so nervous! OMG is she going to tell brian what his father told her?
12/19/2008 c23 N.M.E
Wow! He's the worst heartless bastard I've ever seen. That was VERY sad! This better turn out to be angsty! UPDATE!
Wow! He's the worst heartless bastard I've ever seen. That was VERY sad! This better turn out to be angsty! UPDATE!
12/19/2008 c23 8RomanticGirly101
0_0 ...O.M.G...
I am seriously shaking right now (though that could be because I'm cold, but I doubt it).
I think I get the part one and part two now. Or at least part one. I think I'll cry if she breaks up with him. He should secretly buy a new cell phone and then they can talk all the time. And then college will start...
Grr! It's makes me frustrated and sad! But in a happy way.
Awesome chapter!
And I'll be gone for a week too...
8RomanticGirly1010_0 ...O.M.G...
I am seriously shaking right now (though that could be because I'm cold, but I doubt it).
I think I get the part one and part two now. Or at least part one. I think I'll cry if she breaks up with him. He should secretly buy a new cell phone and then they can talk all the time. And then college will start...
Grr! It's makes me frustrated and sad! But in a happy way.
Awesome chapter!
And I'll be gone for a week too...
12/19/2008 c23 nejimo
I hate to say this, but that evil bastard was right about Maggie making her mistake. She didn't seem to think everything through with the whole "breakup" thing, which caused all this drama that she needs to take responsibility for.
Why must Mr. Deacon be such a douche bag? :P Maggie made a mistake, but Mr. Deacon seems to be taking things way too far to move his entire family against their will just so Maggie and Brian could break up and not be together. Drama, drama, drama!
Always a fan,
Nejimo
I hate to say this, but that evil bastard was right about Maggie making her mistake. She didn't seem to think everything through with the whole "breakup" thing, which caused all this drama that she needs to take responsibility for.
Why must Mr. Deacon be such a douche bag? :P Maggie made a mistake, but Mr. Deacon seems to be taking things way too far to move his entire family against their will just so Maggie and Brian could break up and not be together. Drama, drama, drama!
Always a fan,
Nejimo
12/19/2008 c23 6sooner or later its over
OMG. I didn't think it was possible for me to hate mr. deacon anymore than i did but i guess i can.
6sooner or later its overOMG. I didn't think it was possible for me to hate mr. deacon anymore than i did but i guess i can.