for Breaking Brian Deacon12/19/2008 c23 kik
that bastard of a father!
that bastard of a father!
12/19/2008 c23 smeckles92
no! she better not break up with him! she should tell him what his dad said. I hate Mr. Deacon! lol
isnt Brian 18? So couldn't he stay? But then, if Maggie broke up with him he probably wouldnt want to stay...
omg... please update soon ;D
no! she better not break up with him! she should tell him what his dad said. I hate Mr. Deacon! lol
isnt Brian 18? So couldn't he stay? But then, if Maggie broke up with him he probably wouldnt want to stay...
omg... please update soon ;D
12/19/2008 c23 
1Devoted.Lilly
I hate that you have the skill to keep us all WTF! make more!.
DAMN YOU'RE SO GOOD AT THIS.
You have GOT to hurry up with the update.
x]
1Devoted.LillyI hate that you have the skill to keep us all WTF! make more!.
DAMN YOU'RE SO GOOD AT THIS.
You have GOT to hurry up with the update.
x]
12/19/2008 c23 adnama3121
Wait... didn't Brian just graduate from high school? There's no way his dad could even legally MAKE him move. He's 18 and his father can't monitor his emails or do any of that.
But, you know, besides all that, poor Maggie and Brian. I don't even want to know what's going to happen. I think it's going to get very sad, very soon.
Also, I'm really getting into your other story, the Cinderella one. I probably should review it, but... I just sometimes don't feel like it, lol
~Amanda~
Wait... didn't Brian just graduate from high school? There's no way his dad could even legally MAKE him move. He's 18 and his father can't monitor his emails or do any of that.
But, you know, besides all that, poor Maggie and Brian. I don't even want to know what's going to happen. I think it's going to get very sad, very soon.
Also, I'm really getting into your other story, the Cinderella one. I probably should review it, but... I just sometimes don't feel like it, lol
~Amanda~
12/19/2008 c23 4scattered-strings
Oh my god, what a savage. And over such a little reason!
What a way to end the chapter...
I can't wait to read your secret project.
4scattered-stringsOh my god, what a savage. And over such a little reason!
What a way to end the chapter...
I can't wait to read your secret project.
12/19/2008 c23 chocochip7
wow.i hate mr .deacon!
he's a very creative, smart character but i hate him! :P
well great chapter, definately worth the wait.
wow.i hate mr .deacon!
he's a very creative, smart character but i hate him! :P
well great chapter, definately worth the wait.
12/19/2008 c23 1buffyeesummers
Who does that? What a jerk!
I really want to see how Maggie handles all this.
Looking forward to your next update!
1buffyeesummersWho does that? What a jerk!
I really want to see how Maggie handles all this.
Looking forward to your next update!
12/19/2008 c23 10nul
I was watching the movie Clique based off of that one series, when I got an email alert sound thing. (don't laugh. It was supposed to be a really bad movie, and I wanted some laughs)
I was SO looking forward to this chapter, and I was kinda expecting something a long these lines to happen. I can't put it past Mr. Deacon, at all. :P
"girlfriendzilla" suave! :D
haha!
question, are you going to post Part 2 as a new story or will it just continue in this one?
10nulI was watching the movie Clique based off of that one series, when I got an email alert sound thing. (don't laugh. It was supposed to be a really bad movie, and I wanted some laughs)
I was SO looking forward to this chapter, and I was kinda expecting something a long these lines to happen. I can't put it past Mr. Deacon, at all. :P
"girlfriendzilla" suave! :D
haha!
question, are you going to post Part 2 as a new story or will it just continue in this one?
12/19/2008 c23 4auburnfusion
NO! Maggie has to lie to Brian so he's happy? Sounds like a scary sacrifice. You are the Queen of Drama. I can't wait to see how Part One ends...
Have a great break- hey, I told you that already. :3 Thanks for updating. It's made my break so far.
4auburnfusionNO! Maggie has to lie to Brian so he's happy? Sounds like a scary sacrifice. You are the Queen of Drama. I can't wait to see how Part One ends...
Have a great break- hey, I told you that already. :3 Thanks for updating. It's made my break so far.
12/19/2008 c22 2CynicInLove
Oh my God. Two times. His dad really does not have good timing. Especially the second time. But it's still hilarious..for those who were not involved in it anyways. And Brian Deacon is too perfect to be real. He might not be everyone's prince charming (I know some people who prefer prince asshole than prince charming) but I can bet that the majority of females define him as perfection.
Their situation sucks though. And I am so so so happy that you did not make Levi cheat on Brian's mom. She's too sweet of a character and I have a great aversion to cheating so I would end up hating Brian's dad even more than I already do.
But, anyways, this is such a great story and I really really hope that an update is right around the corner :D
2CynicInLoveOh my God. Two times. His dad really does not have good timing. Especially the second time. But it's still hilarious..for those who were not involved in it anyways. And Brian Deacon is too perfect to be real. He might not be everyone's prince charming (I know some people who prefer prince asshole than prince charming) but I can bet that the majority of females define him as perfection.
Their situation sucks though. And I am so so so happy that you did not make Levi cheat on Brian's mom. She's too sweet of a character and I have a great aversion to cheating so I would end up hating Brian's dad even more than I already do.
But, anyways, this is such a great story and I really really hope that an update is right around the corner :D
12/19/2008 c22 smeckles92
Late review but i only just got to read this chap.
lol i can't believe he walked in on them, that is so awkward. I'd die of embarrassment lol.
Just a question, what is the difference between Part one and two? Is part two still about Brian and Maggie? just wondering.
cant wait for more ;D
Late review but i only just got to read this chap.
lol i can't believe he walked in on them, that is so awkward. I'd die of embarrassment lol.
Just a question, what is the difference between Part one and two? Is part two still about Brian and Maggie? just wondering.
cant wait for more ;D
12/15/2008 c22 ddz008
Wonderful story! I'm completely in love with it! :) I love Brian and I like Maggie a lot (even in the beginning when she was being really stubborn). The secondary characters are also great, their friends Dan, Greg and Gretchen, the mothers, Elvis and Destiny. Even the antagonic characters are good. I like how I can relate with some things that happen in the story. You are making all your characters real. I was so happy when I read about their first date, I guess we all love to have a guy like him. I was feeling terrible when Maggie decided to break up with him, I believed it T_T (it was so mean)... and now... the ending of this chapter makes me want to read the next chapter a lot. And it had to be his father the one that caught them! I also love the gifts and well, Brian is just like a perfect boyfriend. Update soon, please! :)
Wonderful story! I'm completely in love with it! :) I love Brian and I like Maggie a lot (even in the beginning when she was being really stubborn). The secondary characters are also great, their friends Dan, Greg and Gretchen, the mothers, Elvis and Destiny. Even the antagonic characters are good. I like how I can relate with some things that happen in the story. You are making all your characters real. I was so happy when I read about their first date, I guess we all love to have a guy like him. I was feeling terrible when Maggie decided to break up with him, I believed it T_T (it was so mean)... and now... the ending of this chapter makes me want to read the next chapter a lot. And it had to be his father the one that caught them! I also love the gifts and well, Brian is just like a perfect boyfriend. Update soon, please! :)
12/15/2008 c13 3ReadWriteLive
What a cute story so far!
A few things... Brian picked her up at 7pm and they were eating until 10:42 pm? That's pretty wild..
Second, from my experiences, hot air balloon rides are always really really early in the morning, never a night...although it is a story so I guess you get a creative license =)
Third...check your spelling and such to make this story even better!
3ReadWriteLiveWhat a cute story so far!
A few things... Brian picked her up at 7pm and they were eating until 10:42 pm? That's pretty wild..
Second, from my experiences, hot air balloon rides are always really really early in the morning, never a night...although it is a story so I guess you get a creative license =)
Third...check your spelling and such to make this story even better!