for Breaking Brian Deacon11/11/2008 c21 
1Aurora-Love
Heya... well prepeare your self here goes my little wonder rant...
OMg i absolutly fricking lov you, this sotry is not only perfectly written but it is also damm right addictive, i swear i read all 22 chapters in one sitting. what can i say ...i think if you were a man id marry you lol. i think i should give a constructive review as that eould be abit more helpful then a marridge proposal right soo here goes, i would like to see a little more interaction between maggie and mr deacon. i mean i know hes a bastard but come on who doesnt like the classicness of the bad guy. one thing though i do love about your story. i know i said that i loved it already but there is just so many things i do love about it ( i dont have enough space to right them all so ill pick the best ), is that it is not " cliched". you have no idea how much i hate really really cliched peices with cheesy lines like " id bet on you" ( this line is taken from i movie i loved until that very line). this is proberly the longest review i have ever written but I still not done. i read your sory after i read the DMAS piece, which is also brill and am also addicted to ive read it 3 time .. today. though one thing i must ask you to do for meis please update sometime soon i mean please. i never and i mean never read stories that arent finsihed. i didnt check if yours was complete or not and i stated reading, well then i coulnt stop. i think if i reread the last chapter one more time ill die so WRITE SOON MORE.
ok much love ( btw the way if i fail this years exams it will be your fault for distracting me !... only joking .. well mostly)
faithfully your adoring future wife lol ... again with the im kiiding.
no your adoring fan
lauren A.K.A lulu ( romance-princess )
1Aurora-LoveHeya... well prepeare your self here goes my little wonder rant...
OMg i absolutly fricking lov you, this sotry is not only perfectly written but it is also damm right addictive, i swear i read all 22 chapters in one sitting. what can i say ...i think if you were a man id marry you lol. i think i should give a constructive review as that eould be abit more helpful then a marridge proposal right soo here goes, i would like to see a little more interaction between maggie and mr deacon. i mean i know hes a bastard but come on who doesnt like the classicness of the bad guy. one thing though i do love about your story. i know i said that i loved it already but there is just so many things i do love about it ( i dont have enough space to right them all so ill pick the best ), is that it is not " cliched". you have no idea how much i hate really really cliched peices with cheesy lines like " id bet on you" ( this line is taken from i movie i loved until that very line). this is proberly the longest review i have ever written but I still not done. i read your sory after i read the DMAS piece, which is also brill and am also addicted to ive read it 3 time .. today. though one thing i must ask you to do for meis please update sometime soon i mean please. i never and i mean never read stories that arent finsihed. i didnt check if yours was complete or not and i stated reading, well then i coulnt stop. i think if i reread the last chapter one more time ill die so WRITE SOON MORE.
ok much love ( btw the way if i fail this years exams it will be your fault for distracting me !... only joking .. well mostly)
faithfully your adoring future wife lol ... again with the im kiiding.
no your adoring fan
lauren A.K.A lulu ( romance-princess )
11/10/2008 c22 3Amarantis
I'm still loving this.
The beginning was a strong one that immediately caught my attention, and the end was such an awkward situation! XD
3AmarantisI'm still loving this.
The beginning was a strong one that immediately caught my attention, and the end was such an awkward situation! XD
11/10/2008 c22 Moonlight Falls
OMG!
Mr. Deacon does it AGAIN?
See, it's like this. I nearly cried with joy when Brian gave Maggie that ring, and then, bust out laughing when the door opened!
It's sad, though, knowing now that their "break-up" plan is ruined...
You are so awesome!
OMG!
Mr. Deacon does it AGAIN?
See, it's like this. I nearly cried with joy when Brian gave Maggie that ring, and then, bust out laughing when the door opened!
It's sad, though, knowing now that their "break-up" plan is ruined...
You are so awesome!
11/9/2008 c9 Giggless915
Hey, loving the story so far, very well written. I just wanted to note something to you wasn't sure if it had run acrossed your mind or if I had read it wrong. But in the chapter when Gretchen and Maggie were in the coffee shop after the Valentine's Day party and Maggie and Brian were talking you mentioned something. When Brian handed her the contract and she was looking it over and examining it she mentioned (in her thoughts) Brian's dad, how he was a lawyer and all and how it must have rubbed off on Brian. However later on in these chapters you make it seem like Maggie had no clue about any sort of father figure in his life. I wasn't sure if this was because of a rewrites (i know how they go) or what, so figured I'd ask. Keep up the great work though, it is enjoyable :)
Hey, loving the story so far, very well written. I just wanted to note something to you wasn't sure if it had run acrossed your mind or if I had read it wrong. But in the chapter when Gretchen and Maggie were in the coffee shop after the Valentine's Day party and Maggie and Brian were talking you mentioned something. When Brian handed her the contract and she was looking it over and examining it she mentioned (in her thoughts) Brian's dad, how he was a lawyer and all and how it must have rubbed off on Brian. However later on in these chapters you make it seem like Maggie had no clue about any sort of father figure in his life. I wasn't sure if this was because of a rewrites (i know how they go) or what, so figured I'd ask. Keep up the great work though, it is enjoyable :)
11/9/2008 c22 crashendingx
Ah, dramatic! And even I was suprised about the suprise party, haha. I love where this story is going so far, can't wait for you to update :D
Ah, dramatic! And even I was suprised about the suprise party, haha. I love where this story is going so far, can't wait for you to update :D
11/9/2008 c22 E. N. Roberts
There is so much I could say, but it pretty sums up to this; This story rocks! I can't wait for december! Great stoy and thanks for sharing it with us!
There is so much I could say, but it pretty sums up to this; This story rocks! I can't wait for december! Great stoy and thanks for sharing it with us!
11/7/2008 c22 9Destiny2RoseClan
Oh, seems like the cats out of the bag now.
Can't wait for that update of yours. Keep up the awesome work.
9Destiny2RoseClanOh, seems like the cats out of the bag now.
Can't wait for that update of yours. Keep up the awesome work.
11/5/2008 c19 Lauranthalsala
!
Alright, so i haven't been on fictionpress in like... 4 months?
but heyy :) first thing i read when i got back was this and i'm freaking excited :D:D
that's such an interesting plot twist :P
i don't suppose you remember but i theorized that Gretchen got together with Brian's dad? and you said i was close! so haha :D
yay... damn, i would have never figured the bisexual thing though XP
I loved it :D and well
i'ma make this short cuz i wanna read the next three (?) chapters :P
!
Alright, so i haven't been on fictionpress in like... 4 months?
but heyy :) first thing i read when i got back was this and i'm freaking excited :D:D
that's such an interesting plot twist :P
i don't suppose you remember but i theorized that Gretchen got together with Brian's dad? and you said i was close! so haha :D
yay... damn, i would have never figured the bisexual thing though XP
I loved it :D and well
i'ma make this short cuz i wanna read the next three (?) chapters :P
11/4/2008 c22 1chic rebel
brain is the cutest thing in the world. before we found out celeste was the one who dated mr deacon, i thought it was her mom. i really enjoy this story. i cant wait to find out what happens.
1chic rebelbrain is the cutest thing in the world. before we found out celeste was the one who dated mr deacon, i thought it was her mom. i really enjoy this story. i cant wait to find out what happens.
11/3/2008 c22 goodshirt
LMAO! Awesome twist :P I had sort of guessed that they would get so involved in each other at some point that they would get busted in bed :P Still loved it XD
LMAO! Awesome twist :P I had sort of guessed that they would get so involved in each other at some point that they would get busted in bed :P Still loved it XD
11/3/2008 c22 Petra Crystal
Lol.
I love this story.
That situation would be the worst situation to be in.
I would probably die of embarrasment!
Please update as soon as possible.
Thank's.
Petra Crystal
Lol.
I love this story.
That situation would be the worst situation to be in.
I would probably die of embarrasment!
Please update as soon as possible.
Thank's.
Petra Crystal