for Breaking Brian Deacon6/3/2009 c24 anyonebutyou3
It sucks that it had to come to this. I totally felt for Myrika when most of her stuff had been plagiarised, but I completely understand where both of you are coming from. I would be pissed off too. But fortunately for me I have no creative talent at all. lol I actually did start to read Port Summer, and it was good. :) I really liked the storyline, it was definitely not your normal high school cliche fics. Anyway, I understand why you had to do take your fics down. It sucks, but understandable. *nod*
It sucks that it had to come to this. I totally felt for Myrika when most of her stuff had been plagiarised, but I completely understand where both of you are coming from. I would be pissed off too. But fortunately for me I have no creative talent at all. lol I actually did start to read Port Summer, and it was good. :) I really liked the storyline, it was definitely not your normal high school cliche fics. Anyway, I understand why you had to do take your fics down. It sucks, but understandable. *nod*
6/3/2009 c23 
1watergirl795
Since I had already reviewed for chapter 24, i had to go back and review for this one. Now, on with the point i REALLY want to make:
This sucks.
I'm really sorry for you as well as your fans (myself included). You were and are one of my favorite authors and I hate to see this happen to you, let alone anyone else. I completely agree with you...it's completely unacceptable. Not only that, but it's a shame. We're losing a great writer and a favorite, because someone else screwed you (and us) over.
It's totally unfair and I am really sorry. I wish you'd stay on fictionpress...but I understand fully what you're doing.
Now, I'm off to reread your stories...before they're all gone. So I guess this is goodbye.
Thank you so much for all the effort you put into your writing and the dedication you had. I'm sure you've put hours upon hours into this cite, and I just want you to know that it is fully appreciated.
You're the best-good luck.
I
1watergirl795Since I had already reviewed for chapter 24, i had to go back and review for this one. Now, on with the point i REALLY want to make:
This sucks.
I'm really sorry for you as well as your fans (myself included). You were and are one of my favorite authors and I hate to see this happen to you, let alone anyone else. I completely agree with you...it's completely unacceptable. Not only that, but it's a shame. We're losing a great writer and a favorite, because someone else screwed you (and us) over.
It's totally unfair and I am really sorry. I wish you'd stay on fictionpress...but I understand fully what you're doing.
Now, I'm off to reread your stories...before they're all gone. So I guess this is goodbye.
Thank you so much for all the effort you put into your writing and the dedication you had. I'm sure you've put hours upon hours into this cite, and I just want you to know that it is fully appreciated.
You're the best-good luck.
I
6/3/2009 c24 46Sarah Supernova
Hi. I've been following this story for a while, but honestly I'm a really lazy reviewer. I just wanted to tell you that I seriously adore your writing, and that it's ridiculous that anyone would be that stupid. Please don't let this discourage you from writing, because you're definitely good.
I'm just wondering, because you didn't say, what's the name/tag of the community? I'd like to continue following, but I don't see it anywhere. :) Thanks, and keep being awesome, alright?
46Sarah SupernovaHi. I've been following this story for a while, but honestly I'm a really lazy reviewer. I just wanted to tell you that I seriously adore your writing, and that it's ridiculous that anyone would be that stupid. Please don't let this discourage you from writing, because you're definitely good.
I'm just wondering, because you didn't say, what's the name/tag of the community? I'd like to continue following, but I don't see it anywhere. :) Thanks, and keep being awesome, alright?
6/3/2009 c24 4lulu.lemon
I totally understand your leaving fictionpress. I have also been plagarized once, that I know of so far anyway and I know how upsetting it is. I also reported it to the monitors but nothing was ever done. I will definately be going to LJ soon and I wish you the best of luck. Just to let you know, you were one of the first authors I read of fictionpress and you inspiired me to finally post my own stories onto fictionpress because I was scared of what people might think. So I really wanted ot thank you for that. Best of luck in the future and Ill hopefully hear more from you soon.
4lulu.lemonI totally understand your leaving fictionpress. I have also been plagarized once, that I know of so far anyway and I know how upsetting it is. I also reported it to the monitors but nothing was ever done. I will definately be going to LJ soon and I wish you the best of luck. Just to let you know, you were one of the first authors I read of fictionpress and you inspiired me to finally post my own stories onto fictionpress because I was scared of what people might think. So I really wanted ot thank you for that. Best of luck in the future and Ill hopefully hear more from you soon.
6/3/2009 c24 3SimplySweetnSour
so annoying
you're the 4th author this week that i found out got plagiarized :[
3SimplySweetnSourso annoying
you're the 4th author this week that i found out got plagiarized :[
6/3/2009 c23 6cityflux
I, like many others, were very saddened by their break-up, but I think it is very appropriate for the title, situation and characters.
I'm a sucker for happy endings, so I'd like to think in private that they met at college (or in the future) and got back together.
All in all, it's been a great story and yes, I do hope that you will write more. There are very few mistakes and I enjoy your writing style and characters.
- Tetrys
6cityfluxI, like many others, were very saddened by their break-up, but I think it is very appropriate for the title, situation and characters.
I'm a sucker for happy endings, so I'd like to think in private that they met at college (or in the future) and got back together.
All in all, it's been a great story and yes, I do hope that you will write more. There are very few mistakes and I enjoy your writing style and characters.
- Tetrys
5/31/2009 c1 1All That Spunk
Saweet story! I like it alot so far, so im pretty sure it's gonna be great. I'm pretty late on reading it but still, I just thought id say how much I like it so far. I mean u seriously got me with the whole summary.
1All That SpunkSaweet story! I like it alot so far, so im pretty sure it's gonna be great. I'm pretty late on reading it but still, I just thought id say how much I like it so far. I mean u seriously got me with the whole summary.
5/30/2009 c24 3esther.hia
hi sammy.
new reader here.
i just read breaking brian deacon through, completely engulfed by the story. sadly, i must say that i am heartbroken by the ending. the cycle of broken love was yet once again the breaking glass in the tension between the two families. perhaps one day, the next, third generation's story could be told?
truth be told, this is my first review. i have chosen to bestow my virgin comments unto your honorary story.
the GRAMMATICALLY correct writing, the little details that make it all the more memorable, the classic angst of bittersweet highschool love... it all endeared to my lust for a good romance to push off my finals preparations.
even as my shaky fingers are typing this, my mind is fabricating and dispersing all sorts of possibilities for the two-meeting accidentally after college graduation, being assigned together on the same project in a company setting, attending destiny's wedding...
needless to say, you have a true writer's talent. i have already decided to follow up closely-stalk-all your other masterpieces, and i am already anticipating the reading the next story off your list. thank you for providing me with such a warm, stomach-fluttering time, while still reminding the rest of us that love is a double edged sword.
-estherness
3esther.hiahi sammy.
new reader here.
i just read breaking brian deacon through, completely engulfed by the story. sadly, i must say that i am heartbroken by the ending. the cycle of broken love was yet once again the breaking glass in the tension between the two families. perhaps one day, the next, third generation's story could be told?
truth be told, this is my first review. i have chosen to bestow my virgin comments unto your honorary story.
the GRAMMATICALLY correct writing, the little details that make it all the more memorable, the classic angst of bittersweet highschool love... it all endeared to my lust for a good romance to push off my finals preparations.
even as my shaky fingers are typing this, my mind is fabricating and dispersing all sorts of possibilities for the two-meeting accidentally after college graduation, being assigned together on the same project in a company setting, attending destiny's wedding...
needless to say, you have a true writer's talent. i have already decided to follow up closely-stalk-all your other masterpieces, and i am already anticipating the reading the next story off your list. thank you for providing me with such a warm, stomach-fluttering time, while still reminding the rest of us that love is a double edged sword.
-estherness
5/28/2009 c24 haterofbbd
that was the most horrible ending i have ever read in any story on fp. in one of your AN you wrote that their would be a part 2 and that it would be 15 ch. long. I think it would have been better had you just said that you were tired of continuuing with the story then ruining it for the readers and saying that that was the ending. so bravo for ruinging a story that could have been amazing.
that was the most horrible ending i have ever read in any story on fp. in one of your AN you wrote that their would be a part 2 and that it would be 15 ch. long. I think it would have been better had you just said that you were tired of continuuing with the story then ruining it for the readers and saying that that was the ending. so bravo for ruinging a story that could have been amazing.
5/28/2009 c24 7Liya Smith
Im probably the only one, but I thought the ending fit perfectly. And the title goes in well with that. Strangely, for such a light-hearted story, there was a tragic ending. :( I would be totally freaked out if my dad walked in on me having sex! EEP.
7Liya SmithIm probably the only one, but I thought the ending fit perfectly. And the title goes in well with that. Strangely, for such a light-hearted story, there was a tragic ending. :( I would be totally freaked out if my dad walked in on me having sex! EEP.
5/27/2009 c24 1Goin-to-Cali-bby-10211994
Wait wait wait that was a horrible ending!it was so sad!my god this kids been chasing her for 13 freakin years!I mean it does fit the tittle and everything but in my opinion I think you should do another one in Brains point of view.it would make the ending too the oother story...and didn't you saytjere was gonig to be a part two or something like that? Great story over all though but u should really do another one in Brains P.O.V.
1Goin-to-Cali-bby-10211994Wait wait wait that was a horrible ending!it was so sad!my god this kids been chasing her for 13 freakin years!I mean it does fit the tittle and everything but in my opinion I think you should do another one in Brains point of view.it would make the ending too the oother story...and didn't you saytjere was gonig to be a part two or something like that? Great story over all though but u should really do another one in Brains P.O.V.
5/24/2009 c24 1Hysterical Smiles
;( i'm sad... oh well, i guess you are right about the happy endings part. i really liked the story though!
1Hysterical Smiles;( i'm sad... oh well, i guess you are right about the happy endings part. i really liked the story though!
5/22/2009 c24 1P.F Ally
I'll be honest. I don't like the ending. Brian chased Maggie for 13 years already dammit! Hard work have to pay off you know.
1P.F AllyI'll be honest. I don't like the ending. Brian chased Maggie for 13 years already dammit! Hard work have to pay off you know.
5/17/2009 c1 becc
ok honestly, wtf did you end iit like that for!
it was so stupid! you should have at least done an epilogue. it just doesnt seem finished to me! like theres just a little more to go.
but realy good story otherwise, but i still tink dont make a scene is better :)
ok honestly, wtf did you end iit like that for!
it was so stupid! you should have at least done an epilogue. it just doesnt seem finished to me! like theres just a little more to go.
but realy good story otherwise, but i still tink dont make a scene is better :)