for Breaking Brian Deacon3/30/2009 c24 ohmysterygirl
OMFG i loved that story, but that ending jst didnt feel right. i mean maggie and brian jst left it at that and it seemed cliffhanger-ish and it jst feels incomplete. hope u decide to write an epilogue sometime in the future :)
OMFG i loved that story, but that ending jst didnt feel right. i mean maggie and brian jst left it at that and it seemed cliffhanger-ish and it jst feels incomplete. hope u decide to write an epilogue sometime in the future :)
3/29/2009 c24 Underthecloud
I have to admit, I started reading this and fell in love, I'm disappointed that you ended it there. It fits the title, but the story had so much that hasn't been wrapped up. I hope that one day in the future you come back and either edit the last chapter or add a small epilogue so we can really say au revoir to your characters. I'll be putting this on my alerts just in case. On a side note, good luck with school. :)
I have to admit, I started reading this and fell in love, I'm disappointed that you ended it there. It fits the title, but the story had so much that hasn't been wrapped up. I hope that one day in the future you come back and either edit the last chapter or add a small epilogue so we can really say au revoir to your characters. I'll be putting this on my alerts just in case. On a side note, good luck with school. :)
3/29/2009 c24 rachelaine
I understand where you're coming from, definitely, too bad this was a heart retching ending for me. :(
I understand where you're coming from, definitely, too bad this was a heart retching ending for me. :(
3/28/2009 c24 phuneral
I definitely appreciate you taking a realistic approach instead of just throwing in an 'And they lived happily ever after,' but...
In my opinion, it seems like a cliffhanger ending. I would have liked to have seen an epilogue of the two of them meeting up again in the future and catching up with each other on what has happened in their lives since they broke up. It would have been a nice way to show that they have both moved on.
I definitely appreciate you taking a realistic approach instead of just throwing in an 'And they lived happily ever after,' but...
In my opinion, it seems like a cliffhanger ending. I would have liked to have seen an epilogue of the two of them meeting up again in the future and catching up with each other on what has happened in their lives since they broke up. It would have been a nice way to show that they have both moved on.
3/28/2009 c24 Kelly
Hmm~ You know, besides the whole 'happy-ending-missing' part, the story just doensn't FEEL finished. I know you're the writer, but honestly, this ending just doesn't fit the tone and mood you've built up. There's no sense of closure; it feels more like a cliffy.
Hmm~ You know, besides the whole 'happy-ending-missing' part, the story just doensn't FEEL finished. I know you're the writer, but honestly, this ending just doesn't fit the tone and mood you've built up. There's no sense of closure; it feels more like a cliffy.
3/28/2009 c24 naufdude
no!
but i guess it's for the best :/ even if i dont really like it.
it fits for the title i guess...
hmph i guess i never really expected that ending it was a surprise!
no!
but i guess it's for the best :/ even if i dont really like it.
it fits for the title i guess...
hmph i guess i never really expected that ending it was a surprise!
3/28/2009 c24 Ginevra-lily
I loved this story but I feel like your ending is a bit of a cop out. It doesn't feel like a completed story, I'm fine with a sad ending (though I would have loved a happy one more) but the chapter needs something more before it can feel like a story with a true finished ending.
I loved this story but I feel like your ending is a bit of a cop out. It doesn't feel like a completed story, I'm fine with a sad ending (though I would have loved a happy one more) but the chapter needs something more before it can feel like a story with a true finished ending.
3/27/2009 c24 chi
I understand where you're coming from. Thanks for not taking this down- it's so good I will probably come back and read it several times more, and thhis is the third time i've read it. Good luck with school and everything!
I understand where you're coming from. Thanks for not taking this down- it's so good I will probably come back and read it several times more, and thhis is the third time i've read it. Good luck with school and everything!
3/24/2009 c24 
1Earthling Queen
Hi. Even though I'm disapointed not to know the ending is not to come, I think you made a good descision. It's more interesting than the ending I usually see; girl gets married, has baby, ect. Twilight knockoffs. (Not that my story is one, 'cause it IS different. Anyway, I loved your story.
The R.A.
1Earthling QueenHi. Even though I'm disapointed not to know the ending is not to come, I think you made a good descision. It's more interesting than the ending I usually see; girl gets married, has baby, ect. Twilight knockoffs. (Not that my story is one, 'cause it IS different. Anyway, I loved your story.
The R.A.
3/24/2009 c1 Lindsay
I think the "realistic" ending bit was a cop out. I don't believe that, realistically, they would never be able to get in touch with each other. It's a sucky "ending" because it's not an ending... and you didn't write it as an ending. There is no sense of finality. This isn't really a complete fic, it's a dead one. I'm just trying to be honest. You never intended for her to "break" Brian, when you were writing it, you meant for him to break her. I just don't think you can give yourself credit with this being a complete work of fiction.
I think the "realistic" ending bit was a cop out. I don't believe that, realistically, they would never be able to get in touch with each other. It's a sucky "ending" because it's not an ending... and you didn't write it as an ending. There is no sense of finality. This isn't really a complete fic, it's a dead one. I'm just trying to be honest. You never intended for her to "break" Brian, when you were writing it, you meant for him to break her. I just don't think you can give yourself credit with this being a complete work of fiction.
3/24/2009 c1 Evanescent.Sight
I agree, the ending does match the title but if you dont make a sequal i will seriously die... metaphorically speaking :P
I agree, the ending does match the title but if you dont make a sequal i will seriously die... metaphorically speaking :P
3/23/2009 c24 1ree.4.jasp
no.
i love this story.
it does make sense to stop, i mean, she did 'break' brian, but its just soo good. cant it be like the never-ending story?
reconsider. please.
1ree.4.jaspno.
i love this story.
it does make sense to stop, i mean, she did 'break' brian, but its just soo good. cant it be like the never-ending story?
reconsider. please.
3/23/2009 c24 1MeLove
I'm highly disappointed that this story won't be continued...I fell in love with this from the first chapter and adore Brian...I'm a sucker for happy endings, the fact that there isn't one here is a real bummer especially since this is so well written. BUT...this is still a wonderful novel..and I can't wait to hear more from you.
1MeLoveI'm highly disappointed that this story won't be continued...I fell in love with this from the first chapter and adore Brian...I'm a sucker for happy endings, the fact that there isn't one here is a real bummer especially since this is so well written. BUT...this is still a wonderful novel..and I can't wait to hear more from you.
3/22/2009 c24 3Agony of the Heart
Well your right about how the title makes more sences with it ending like it has and not all relationships end in a happy ever after, of course it would have been nice for this one!
(throws tiny pebbles at) I'm just joining the masses!
3Agony of the HeartWell your right about how the title makes more sences with it ending like it has and not all relationships end in a happy ever after, of course it would have been nice for this one!
(throws tiny pebbles at) I'm just joining the masses!