5/3/2008 c2 165RandomUser674
This was pretty good. I like the addition of the magical number 7. Are you going to explain why Darria is with foster families? And you explained a lot about how Kornora looked and how Darria envied it. Does that mean Darria thinks she's ugly? What does she look like? Sorry 'bout all the questions, but I like to know a lot about what I'm reading. One more thing. Is Darria magical? If so, are you going to explain it or just have it randomly jump out of nowhere? Good job on the story. I like it so far! :D