for I Wish You Were A Zombie3/5/2019 c1 Pendingdeletion
Sometimes when I feel randomly emotional and need a good cry, I read this. It works, I have tears streaming down my face now.
It's written in a way that you can feel the emotion and it expresses it in just 690 words.
:)
Sometimes when I feel randomly emotional and need a good cry, I read this. It works, I have tears streaming down my face now.
It's written in a way that you can feel the emotion and it expresses it in just 690 words.
:)
6/26/2010 c1 Insanity
Heart-wrenching is the best way to describe this story. It actually made me cry. Although I prefer happy endings, this story was very well written and moving.
Heart-wrenching is the best way to describe this story. It actually made me cry. Although I prefer happy endings, this story was very well written and moving.
2/18/2010 c1 
6The Burning Angel
That was well written, I generally try to avoid reading angst or tragedies since they are so sad,n i love happy endings, but still I liked this one.
6The Burning AngelThat was well written, I generally try to avoid reading angst or tragedies since they are so sad,n i love happy endings, but still I liked this one.
10/17/2009 c1 4Jane P
that was so amazing!
even though i'm not huge on angst or sad stories i have to admit i loved this story and i adore your writing, seriously wow
4Jane Pthat was so amazing!
even though i'm not huge on angst or sad stories i have to admit i loved this story and i adore your writing, seriously wow
12/8/2008 c1 20Chasmodai Blue
I like zombies, I like dead people, and I like this story.
The main character is so sweet and depressed. It's so cute in a messed up sort of way. I approve.
20Chasmodai BlueI like zombies, I like dead people, and I like this story.
The main character is so sweet and depressed. It's so cute in a messed up sort of way. I approve.
8/14/2008 c1 7Error-Author
Aw I loved it! I'm such a sucker for the tragedy/angst pieces. I fail so miserably to write them myself so I hunt down other peoples work to satisfy my craving lol.
Why haven't I been here before? I thought for sure, you of all people, I'd profile-stalked. What the devil is wrong with me.
Anyhow, I vote lenghtening the one-shot! One-shots just seem like prompts to me- I feel like building to the settings. ^^
Awesome job though! I so enjoyed it even if it was sad.. Much loves!
7Error-AuthorAw I loved it! I'm such a sucker for the tragedy/angst pieces. I fail so miserably to write them myself so I hunt down other peoples work to satisfy my craving lol.
Why haven't I been here before? I thought for sure, you of all people, I'd profile-stalked. What the devil is wrong with me.
Anyhow, I vote lenghtening the one-shot! One-shots just seem like prompts to me- I feel like building to the settings. ^^
Awesome job though! I so enjoyed it even if it was sad.. Much loves!
6/29/2008 c1 3Carnivale
Gorgeous.
Good gracious. I looked at your profile, because I stalk anyone who reviews a story of mine (no, I'm not odd) and I'm glad I did!
First one-shot ever that nearly had me in tears. Very, very good.
3CarnivaleGorgeous.
Good gracious. I looked at your profile, because I stalk anyone who reviews a story of mine (no, I'm not odd) and I'm glad I did!
First one-shot ever that nearly had me in tears. Very, very good.
5/7/2008 c1 1Suzo
I must say, beautifully written. It's got a good solid story and doesn't require explinations like many stories written in similar form. overall, bravo. however, title is EXTREMELY misleading. "Cigarettes for Sunsets" would have been better. (or something to that effect.)
S.
1SuzoI must say, beautifully written. It's got a good solid story and doesn't require explinations like many stories written in similar form. overall, bravo. however, title is EXTREMELY misleading. "Cigarettes for Sunsets" would have been better. (or something to that effect.)
S.
5/5/2008 c1 2Miss Tuesday
An excellent piece. That's a very interesting last line as well - it makes it sound as if the other man is crying as well. I love it.
2Miss TuesdayAn excellent piece. That's a very interesting last line as well - it makes it sound as if the other man is crying as well. I love it.