for Listen8/5/2003 c1 Silver Ice
Wow, that was really good! Obviously you can write poetry, and well. Keep up the great work.
Wow, that was really good! Obviously you can write poetry, and well. Keep up the great work.
8/5/2003 c1 
20Shining Moonlight
Kiora-
Oh, I like this! It flows very well, and it tells the harsh truth..expecially the last two lines.
Keep writing! I'm adding this to my favourite stories list.
-Shining Moonlight
20Shining MoonlightKiora-
Oh, I like this! It flows very well, and it tells the harsh truth..expecially the last two lines.
Keep writing! I'm adding this to my favourite stories list.
-Shining Moonlight
4/20/2002 c1 natasha
yah ur totally xpressin the lil feelin i hav 4 big bird and soup
yah ur totally xpressin the lil feelin i hav 4 big bird and soup
12/29/2001 c1 empty account
i can relate, I have a major crush, but would I tell him, NEVER. Keep writing.
i can relate, I have a major crush, but would I tell him, NEVER. Keep writing.
6/9/2001 c1 1Jello1
awww, thats good. I'm always afraid to tell people stuff too. I'm way too shy and it sucks! BLAH BLAH BLAH! OKay, thats my goal. Not to be shy any more. Your poems really get to me!
1Jello1awww, thats good. I'm always afraid to tell people stuff too. I'm way too shy and it sucks! BLAH BLAH BLAH! OKay, thats my goal. Not to be shy any more. Your poems really get to me!
6/3/2001 c1 50Kittioto
ACK! THIS BRINGS TEARS TO MY EYES! Oh, this would be soooooo perfect for this DBZ story I have called "Dream Maker"... ~sniff~ You touch me! If I happened to have mascara on, which I RARELY do, for I am at the young age of almost 14, my eyes would be getting black! Well... probably. Anyway, I LOVE THIS ONE! It is SOOOO going on my faves! ~Starts to cry hysterically again~
50KittiotoACK! THIS BRINGS TEARS TO MY EYES! Oh, this would be soooooo perfect for this DBZ story I have called "Dream Maker"... ~sniff~ You touch me! If I happened to have mascara on, which I RARELY do, for I am at the young age of almost 14, my eyes would be getting black! Well... probably. Anyway, I LOVE THIS ONE! It is SOOOO going on my faves! ~Starts to cry hysterically again~
5/23/2001 c1 29Honey Kitten
Aw wow. That's really good! "I'm trying to tell you.. Will you listen to me?" I really really like that line! All the other last lines really get to me to! But I love the whole thing!
29Honey KittenAw wow. That's really good! "I'm trying to tell you.. Will you listen to me?" I really really like that line! All the other last lines really get to me to! But I love the whole thing!
4/15/2001 c1 Anuja
AWWWWWWW THIS IS DEFINETLY ABOUT *THAT ONE PERSON*
AWWWWWWW THIS IS DEFINETLY ABOUT *THAT ONE PERSON*
4/11/2001 c1 Asia
That was really good, I can relate with it. I think you did a good job on it.
That was really good, I can relate with it. I think you did a good job on it.