for Thinking of You3/16/2009 c1 May Elizabeth
A poem struggles to be born. This poem has potential, but I think you could add more detail at certain parts to let the reader see what you see. I would also suggest stanzas.
A poem struggles to be born. This poem has potential, but I think you could add more detail at certain parts to let the reader see what you see. I would also suggest stanzas.
3/8/2009 c1 
10Elephant-Artist
This poem has a good concept to it. Integrands and eclipctics great words. Please read and review my stuff. :)
10Elephant-ArtistThis poem has a good concept to it. Integrands and eclipctics great words. Please read and review my stuff. :)
5/21/2008 c1 612simpleplan13
Of my minds eye,.. isn't it mind's?
This is very sweet... I like the beginning description of how far they are and the simile with the perfume was nice as well
612simpleplan13Of my minds eye,.. isn't it mind's?
This is very sweet... I like the beginning description of how far they are and the simile with the perfume was nice as well