for Kaldor Saga 1: Enraptured9/9/2012 c4 anonymous
What the hell is this? Way to waste my time posting random little posts of nothing. Your story sounded interesting, but apparently you don't want people to read it. Don't post things if they're not worth reading, which your obnoxious little posts weren't.
What the hell is this? Way to waste my time posting random little posts of nothing. Your story sounded interesting, but apparently you don't want people to read it. Don't post things if they're not worth reading, which your obnoxious little posts weren't.
9/25/2009 c2 DefineNightmare
ZOMG, You made my day!
In the words of my mother, "I wish you luck...break a leg girlfriend".
Yes, she's going to buy it for me...she just doesn't know what it's about ;)
ZOMG, You made my day!
In the words of my mother, "I wish you luck...break a leg girlfriend".
Yes, she's going to buy it for me...she just doesn't know what it's about ;)
5/12/2009 c1 xXx.Fallen.Angel.xXx
Hey,
What happened to the rest of this story? It was up before wasnt it?... well anyway, I absolutely love it and if the problems just with my computer, then my computers gonna die, otherwise, could u please re-post them... THANK YOU
x
Hey,
What happened to the rest of this story? It was up before wasnt it?... well anyway, I absolutely love it and if the problems just with my computer, then my computers gonna die, otherwise, could u please re-post them... THANK YOU
x
5/4/2009 c1 Muthine
But, but, where did all the chapters go?
I started this this weekend and I'm pretty sure there was more than one o.O *pouts*
But, but, where did all the chapters go?
I started this this weekend and I'm pretty sure there was more than one o.O *pouts*
3/8/2009 c32 Poptart Guava King
D:
:O
OH MY GOD. HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO HIM?
*Cries in a corner*
-on to find out what happens next-
D:
:O
OH MY GOD. HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO HIM?
*Cries in a corner*
-on to find out what happens next-
2/17/2009 c32 i-see-faeries
Well that's a horrible way to end this! I think I love just about everyone here. Well all the main pairings at least. They're all adorable in their own ways. Hard to say which I like most. But anyways, I love this! It's super addicting. I'm suppose to be studying but I got caught up with this instead. Great job! Much love!
Well that's a horrible way to end this! I think I love just about everyone here. Well all the main pairings at least. They're all adorable in their own ways. Hard to say which I like most. But anyways, I love this! It's super addicting. I'm suppose to be studying but I got caught up with this instead. Great job! Much love!
1/19/2009 c32 Night Innocence
I'm glad you had the "answers to possible questions section."
Well, great ending although it's not so much of an ending.
Urg... the kings piss me off.
Well what they did was sort of understandable, but still.
I thought Xander was going to be a bad guy, but I'm glad that he turned out to be good.
I love the uproar caused by the capture of the two princes, shows how much they are loved. Aww...
Can't wait to read what happens to them afterwards!
(in case you are wondering, I already finished the whole story when I reviewed chapters 1 and 3)
I'm glad you had the "answers to possible questions section."
Well, great ending although it's not so much of an ending.
Urg... the kings piss me off.
Well what they did was sort of understandable, but still.
I thought Xander was going to be a bad guy, but I'm glad that he turned out to be good.
I love the uproar caused by the capture of the two princes, shows how much they are loved. Aww...
Can't wait to read what happens to them afterwards!
(in case you are wondering, I already finished the whole story when I reviewed chapters 1 and 3)
1/19/2009 c1 Night Innocence
Oh god,
why are most of the good slash stories on fictionpress so... abusive?
Poor Gabriel, hope he lands in a better situation soon.
Oh god,
why are most of the good slash stories on fictionpress so... abusive?
Poor Gabriel, hope he lands in a better situation soon.
1/19/2009 c12 Aypearl
Great story so far! I've really enjoyed it. Great descriptions and it just sucked me in. I do wish that Gabriel hadn't had sex with Lucien so easily though. After suffering so much physical and sexual abuse I have a really hard time believing that he could so easily put his baggage behind him. When he started to have a flashback, he just 'willed' it away. I know this is fiction, but for me, I would have prefered Lucien then having to help Gabriel deal with the ensuing panic attack etc. I just have trouble with Gabriel have sex so easily when he has suffered so much trauma.
Overall though a great story and I am definitely loving it. I don't think I"ll be going to bed tonight until I've finished it! :)
Great story so far! I've really enjoyed it. Great descriptions and it just sucked me in. I do wish that Gabriel hadn't had sex with Lucien so easily though. After suffering so much physical and sexual abuse I have a really hard time believing that he could so easily put his baggage behind him. When he started to have a flashback, he just 'willed' it away. I know this is fiction, but for me, I would have prefered Lucien then having to help Gabriel deal with the ensuing panic attack etc. I just have trouble with Gabriel have sex so easily when he has suffered so much trauma.
Overall though a great story and I am definitely loving it. I don't think I"ll be going to bed tonight until I've finished it! :)
1/17/2009 c10 
3bigyellowtaxi
I'm not gonna lie, i seriously think you could make a published book out of this- if you went into a little more detail.Very well written, but i got lost at points with who was talking and what they were walking about etc.
I'm really enjoying it though :p
3bigyellowtaxiI'm not gonna lie, i seriously think you could make a published book out of this- if you went into a little more detail.Very well written, but i got lost at points with who was talking and what they were walking about etc.
I'm really enjoying it though :p
12/16/2008 c3 ritakamakamakamakamaka
strange name I know don't judge me ._. I love your stories, they rock my socks. Just thought I would review (because you told us to at the top of your story) :P thanks for the read
strange name I know don't judge me ._. I love your stories, they rock my socks. Just thought I would review (because you told us to at the top of your story) :P thanks for the read
12/13/2008 c32 Loveless Love
I wasn’t really sure if I wanted to continue reading this after the first few chapters cos of the abuse and the non-con but I really wanted to see it through and I’m glad I did. This is a really good and has a great plot.
I’m so glad that you continued from the Coming of Age! When I finished reading this I nearly freaked cos there wasn’t anymore and it was a cliffy, and I saw that the second book(?) in the Kaldor Saga had nothing to do with Coming of Age. It was such a good read and had me on the edge of my seat about 1/4 of the time I was addicted to this fic and ended up reading the whole thing in 2 days :P But I’m really confused as what do I read next. I really want to know what happens next, so should I read Over the Edge Part 2 or read Over the Edge Part 1, cos it’s 1? Or do I read book two…?
Keep up the great work ^-^
I wasn’t really sure if I wanted to continue reading this after the first few chapters cos of the abuse and the non-con but I really wanted to see it through and I’m glad I did. This is a really good and has a great plot.
I’m so glad that you continued from the Coming of Age! When I finished reading this I nearly freaked cos there wasn’t anymore and it was a cliffy, and I saw that the second book(?) in the Kaldor Saga had nothing to do with Coming of Age. It was such a good read and had me on the edge of my seat about 1/4 of the time I was addicted to this fic and ended up reading the whole thing in 2 days :P But I’m really confused as what do I read next. I really want to know what happens next, so should I read Over the Edge Part 2 or read Over the Edge Part 1, cos it’s 1? Or do I read book two…?
Keep up the great work ^-^