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5/6/2008 c1 27Airaceir
Very unorthodox,a refreshing change. I sense a degree of sarcasm here, and the way that it is written by using repetition really enforces and give strength to this piece.

I agree with this piece actually. Those people who wrote those or said those things really didn't have an idea what it's like =.=

Your first and second sentence got me hooked. especially the second one.

'I say that losing a love hurts like fucking hell.' Totally agreed.

A really strong piece. i love it!=)Keep on writing!
5/6/2008 c1 29Rynx-too-genki
Very nice! Its raw and real with emotion!

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