for Empty Existence8/24/2008 c1 Pierce Dorian
This is a pretty cool poem. I really hope any of that stuff never happens.
This is a pretty cool poem. I really hope any of that stuff never happens.
5/24/2008 c1 
612simpleplan13
I like this piece because it brings up a very good point. I also love the ending, it sounds funny, but is probably insanely true. The only thing is (especially in the beginning) the italicizing and placement of that line made it look like a note with the title, not part of the piece.
Other than that it was a really great piece. I hope you get a good grade!
PS If you're bored today check out the Review Game's Review Marathon (link in my profile)
612simpleplan13I like this piece because it brings up a very good point. I also love the ending, it sounds funny, but is probably insanely true. The only thing is (especially in the beginning) the italicizing and placement of that line made it look like a note with the title, not part of the piece.
Other than that it was a really great piece. I hope you get a good grade!
PS If you're bored today check out the Review Game's Review Marathon (link in my profile)
5/11/2008 c1 lkjhgfdswertyuikmnbvcxsrtyuknb
I've always been terrifyed of WW3, and this describes how it could be perfectly...
And I love that quote by Albert Einstein, although it scares me even more sometimes, but that's just the way war is...
I've always been terrifyed of WW3, and this describes how it could be perfectly...
And I love that quote by Albert Einstein, although it scares me even more sometimes, but that's just the way war is...
5/7/2008 c1 6xEmoMuffinx
This coming from the person who was so caught up about my dodgy rhythm in Incomplete. I already commented on her dA so I'll just cut it out here.
Anyway, I like the last line before the quote finishes. :D
The digital realm awaits...
6xEmoMuffinxThis coming from the person who was so caught up about my dodgy rhythm in Incomplete. I already commented on her dA so I'll just cut it out here.
Anyway, I like the last line before the quote finishes. :D
The digital realm awaits...