for Nail Biting5/23/2008 c1 
65Nemonus
Excellent imagery, absolutely nauseating. My favorite line is the second one. Good word choice.
65NemonusExcellent imagery, absolutely nauseating. My favorite line is the second one. Good word choice.
5/13/2008 c1 15Lauren Wolfe
Fixations, fixations. You WERE talking about the fingers on your hand, right? Hik-hik-hik. Cute ^_^
Keep on writing! Yaho :D
15Lauren WolfeFixations, fixations. You WERE talking about the fingers on your hand, right? Hik-hik-hik. Cute ^_^
Keep on writing! Yaho :D
5/11/2008 c1 146Sexy Vampirechick
The first two lines were very nice. I liked them a lot. I remember seeing those little kids chew their finger nails. It really does look like the secret of life was at their finger tips. The imagery you put on was done very well.I can picture this happening.
146Sexy VampirechickThe first two lines were very nice. I liked them a lot. I remember seeing those little kids chew their finger nails. It really does look like the secret of life was at their finger tips. The imagery you put on was done very well.I can picture this happening.
5/11/2008 c1 ode to a nightingale
Love this, especially the last line. You describe things so well. I've never been one for nail biting... my nails are long and sharp and black =)
Anyway, I love! :)
Love this, especially the last line. You describe things so well. I've never been one for nail biting... my nails are long and sharp and black =)
Anyway, I love! :)
5/9/2008 c1 2krista euphoria
! review game
+ I loved how you included bandages "with cartoon prints and animal patterns". It made me smile because I had always loved those kinds of bandages when I was little. (:
+ The way you ended it was humorous! ". . . self-cannibalism. And this is stress relief?"
Overall, great, unique poem! (:
2krista euphoria! review game
+ I loved how you included bandages "with cartoon prints and animal patterns". It made me smile because I had always loved those kinds of bandages when I was little. (:
+ The way you ended it was humorous! ". . . self-cannibalism. And this is stress relief?"
Overall, great, unique poem! (:
5/6/2008 c1 half-sketched.staccatos
konnichi wa
Wow, this is so intriguing! Sorry, that may not be the word you were hoping for, LoL. It's just that I've never read a poem like this before - it's such an interesting perspective. And not the bad "interesting" but the good one. :) Your ideas are unique. Kudos.
Ha det
-Shan-
konnichi wa
Wow, this is so intriguing! Sorry, that may not be the word you were hoping for, LoL. It's just that I've never read a poem like this before - it's such an interesting perspective. And not the bad "interesting" but the good one. :) Your ideas are unique. Kudos.
Ha det
-Shan-