9/23/2012 c7 Bubbly Girl
PLEASE FINISH! I just need to know what happens next! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
Bubbly Girl
PLEASE FINISH! I just need to know what happens next! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
Bubbly Girl
2/29/2012 c6 8duckliy543
So i read this today again. I read this a few years ago when you first published it and i was in love with it then and here i thought i had changed but no, years later still loving this story! amazing! i really liked it good job! you should be so proud!
So i read this today again. I read this a few years ago when you first published it and i was in love with it then and here i thought i had changed but no, years later still loving this story! amazing! i really liked it good job! you should be so proud!
2/26/2012 c7 Alice in Vulgarland
Such an akward chapter between anjali and andrew ^_^ i love it.it's very realistic in the sense of the emotions you feel with someone you like prior to finally being together. Keep it up! 3 can't wait for some more updates! :D
Such an akward chapter between anjali and andrew ^_^ i love it.it's very realistic in the sense of the emotions you feel with someone you like prior to finally being together. Keep it up! 3 can't wait for some more updates! :D
2/25/2012 c7 CaitlinEA
At the end of every chapter, all I can think is "Oh, my god! Have sex already!"
Hahaha!
At the end of every chapter, all I can think is "Oh, my god! Have sex already!"
Hahaha!
2/24/2012 c7 1Spiked Angel
This was really nice and romantic, but the scenes should have been fleshed out more.
This was really nice and romantic, but the scenes should have been fleshed out more.
11/7/2011 c6 blythely
oh! so sweet. the two of them have such an easy and loving dynamic. i play soccer so I also like the extra the soccer bits.
oh! so sweet. the two of them have such an easy and loving dynamic. i play soccer so I also like the extra the soccer bits.
8/12/2011 c2 20xxTunstall Chickxx
Haha, I wasn't going to review again so soon but here I am. I vaguely remember this story... very lovely. There are however a few spelling, grammar and general typos still in the text. From personal experience I guarantee that you can go over it a thousand times and still miss stuff - in the end you'll see what you think ought to be there and not necessarily what is. If you ever want a friendly eye to give a chapter a once-over, let me know!
xxTunstall Chickxx
Haha, I wasn't going to review again so soon but here I am. I vaguely remember this story... very lovely. There are however a few spelling, grammar and general typos still in the text. From personal experience I guarantee that you can go over it a thousand times and still miss stuff - in the end you'll see what you think ought to be there and not necessarily what is. If you ever want a friendly eye to give a chapter a once-over, let me know!
xxTunstall Chickxx
1/20/2011 c1 blithe.serendipity
Ooh I like your writing style. It sounds kinda like what I would say about lovee, I love cliches and I really want it to happen to me.
On another note, are you going to update this? :) Please? And what's this about another story. I'm not entirely sure what happened here cuz it hasn't been updated in almost a year. Can you send it to me? Or post it?Thanks a BUNCH. And once again, I loved this small sectionn, very insightful.
Ooh I like your writing style. It sounds kinda like what I would say about lovee, I love cliches and I really want it to happen to me.
On another note, are you going to update this? :) Please? And what's this about another story. I'm not entirely sure what happened here cuz it hasn't been updated in almost a year. Can you send it to me? Or post it?Thanks a BUNCH. And once again, I loved this small sectionn, very insightful.
7/31/2010 c6 2lambchops15
I love the story so far! Please, please keep writing! It's absolutely terrific :)
I love the story so far! Please, please keep writing! It's absolutely terrific :)
7/23/2010 c6 Pop the Bubble
I think you should update :)
Poor anjali... the sexual tension between her and Drew is crazy! I love this so much haha
I think you should update :)
Poor anjali... the sexual tension between her and Drew is crazy! I love this so much haha