for Won't Let Go5/14/2008 c1 
95Stewart MacDonald
Hey. Another decent work here. In the first paragraph though, is bellows a good word? Usually people asscociate bellowing with men. Maybe, 'Screams to go' or something might be better. Bellow. Such a funny word. For some reason I always think of walruses when I hear that word, or is it walri?
Aside from the funny word, this seems pretty good. Well put together and emotionally in tune and all that happy shit. Peace.
95Stewart MacDonaldHey. Another decent work here. In the first paragraph though, is bellows a good word? Usually people asscociate bellowing with men. Maybe, 'Screams to go' or something might be better. Bellow. Such a funny word. For some reason I always think of walruses when I hear that word, or is it walri?
Aside from the funny word, this seems pretty good. Well put together and emotionally in tune and all that happy shit. Peace.