5/7/2008 c1 94AK the Twilight
This is a good poem. I like the recurring theme of emotions and then, in a rather dark twist, how to leave them behind. It is a bit dampening on the whole love issue, but that's its charm I suppose. It's not the most optimistic of prose, but it's well-worth is praise considering how troublesome love's aftereffects can be. Regardless, I like this.
Keep up the great work.
This is a good poem. I like the recurring theme of emotions and then, in a rather dark twist, how to leave them behind. It is a bit dampening on the whole love issue, but that's its charm I suppose. It's not the most optimistic of prose, but it's well-worth is praise considering how troublesome love's aftereffects can be. Regardless, I like this.
Keep up the great work.
5/7/2008 c1 131Beauty From Pain
This reminds me of me and my best guy friend at the moment. Nice piece. =)
This reminds me of me and my best guy friend at the moment. Nice piece. =)