5/7/2008 c1 94AK the Twilight
Wow, this is very impressive. You seem to really know your stuff when it comes to writing songs. This would sound great to music.

It does sound relatively simple; I mean, it sounds like a break-up song, a good break-up song, but still, break-up songs have a tendency to sound alike. Maybe this one doesn't. The lyrics are okay, but you seemed to manipulate and organize them into something much better. Rhymes are kept together and the words don't lose meaning.

I'm pretty torn on this, but I have to say that it shows hard work and commitment. I gotta hand it to you; this shows prowess.