for Smoker's Cough
6/16/2008 c1 
44StormerThis is really amazing! It's like a short story packed into a poem. A pretty dreary story but really powerful.
Love the description of his "cigarette's eye".
Good work!
5/26/2008 c1 33cowpopsI was worried the format would bug me.
But it gave the story so much appeal I'm not bothered at all.
Sad, but very believable.
I likey.
Nice.
cowpops
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