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6/2/2008 c1 3King Patch
hey, thanks for your nice review!

I think you should definitely hurry up and write more than this.

And I think you might get more support in the review area if you disabled signed-reviews-only, but that's obviously your choice :)

Go for it, this summer!
5/10/2008 c1 Counting Petals
Yeah, the whole changing POVs thing was weird, but I also liked how you gave us just a snippet of each of their lives. I was wondering, though, why is the first part in third person and the other two in first person?

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