
5/10/2008 c1 Ninjapocky
haha I love how this first chapter is written. Looks like a very promising story =]
haha I love how this first chapter is written. Looks like a very promising story =]
5/10/2008 c1
5gummybaby
aw, too cute. I can already tell I'm gonna love this story. Elliot's a sweetheart, he actually reminds me a little of a character of mine who's ironically enough named Quinn. Except more endearingly quirky and less out and out crazy...
Anyway, welcome to FP! unless you've been here as a reader for like years and my welcome just sounded stupid...
So to sum up, love the story, welcome, and I want Chuck!

aw, too cute. I can already tell I'm gonna love this story. Elliot's a sweetheart, he actually reminds me a little of a character of mine who's ironically enough named Quinn. Except more endearingly quirky and less out and out crazy...
Anyway, welcome to FP! unless you've been here as a reader for like years and my welcome just sounded stupid...
So to sum up, love the story, welcome, and I want Chuck!
5/10/2008 c1
3scrtshdfgry
i'm glad you changed the names...i like elliot and quinn much better than eric and adam. this is a good start so far. i'd love to see more!

i'm glad you changed the names...i like elliot and quinn much better than eric and adam. this is a good start so far. i'd love to see more!