for Sans Vous, Je Suis Mort11/17/2011 c12 pingping91
WOW. like OHMYGOD I LOVE IT. It's so beautifully written, and I myself love hot emos... well done, I really enjoyed it!
WOW. like OHMYGOD I LOVE IT. It's so beautifully written, and I myself love hot emos... well done, I really enjoyed it!
8/26/2009 c1 thecakethief
I snickered evilly a total of, -thinks- eight times? yes, an improvement, I'm sure.
Jason's hot, update or I'll rip your heart from it's socket, roast it over an open fire, and then eat it with my mouth!
not that i eat with things other than my mouth... I'm not an alien after all...
yes. soo, you get the point, update till your fingers bleed! :D
I snickered evilly a total of, -thinks- eight times? yes, an improvement, I'm sure.
Jason's hot, update or I'll rip your heart from it's socket, roast it over an open fire, and then eat it with my mouth!
not that i eat with things other than my mouth... I'm not an alien after all...
yes. soo, you get the point, update till your fingers bleed! :D
8/13/2009 c8 Keela1221
lol nice. Cale is going to drop in and either freak out or jump Jasons nice bones
lol nice. Cale is going to drop in and either freak out or jump Jasons nice bones
8/13/2009 c5 Keela1221
lol, Jason looks good being green with envy. And seriously how can Cale Not notice thte crush?
lol, Jason looks good being green with envy. And seriously how can Cale Not notice thte crush?
8/13/2009 c2 Keela1221
lmao, that line was classic. "God, his girlfriend was pissed" I kid you not I laughed for 2 whole minutes. Rocky start...oh yes
lmao, that line was classic. "God, his girlfriend was pissed" I kid you not I laughed for 2 whole minutes. Rocky start...oh yes
2/18/2009 c1 
6midnightrocker1212
I am completely love this story. It's bloody brilliant and hilarious but, I am a little bit confused. Didn't Beau say that what he had with Christian was a one night escapde? hm... Maybe I am looking too much into it. Anyways, I love it and keep up the amazing job!
6midnightrocker1212I am completely love this story. It's bloody brilliant and hilarious but, I am a little bit confused. Didn't Beau say that what he had with Christian was a one night escapde? hm... Maybe I am looking too much into it. Anyways, I love it and keep up the amazing job!
10/12/2008 c1 justanotherlurker
I'm sorry, but this is really bothering me: the title should probably be Sans "Toi", Je Suis Mort. "Vous" is used when either the "you" in question is more than one person or when the situation is formal (either it's an important occasion or the person to whom you're speaking is either someone with whom you are not familiar or someone that you want to show respect to, like an elder or a boss). Since Jason and Cale are good friends, they would probably use "toi", if they were speaking French.
I'm sorry, but this is really bothering me: the title should probably be Sans "Toi", Je Suis Mort. "Vous" is used when either the "you" in question is more than one person or when the situation is formal (either it's an important occasion or the person to whom you're speaking is either someone with whom you are not familiar or someone that you want to show respect to, like an elder or a boss). Since Jason and Cale are good friends, they would probably use "toi", if they were speaking French.
9/22/2008 c11 7xxSeptemberSandStormsxx
Magnefique!
-round of applause-
I like this story. I like how you set that fine line between lust and love and confusion. Overall, I loved Jason's character, he was well developed, I especially liked him in the first and second chapter. Cale's character was an interesting follow, while he did fall for Jason, I dont think he's entirely gay. Just...into Jason. Which isn't a bad thing, no, not at all. If anything, it makes it a lot more realistic. You could sharpen your comma use a little but other than that I don't see anything flawed about it. =) Great story.
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7xxSeptemberSandStormsxxMagnefique!
-round of applause-
I like this story. I like how you set that fine line between lust and love and confusion. Overall, I loved Jason's character, he was well developed, I especially liked him in the first and second chapter. Cale's character was an interesting follow, while he did fall for Jason, I dont think he's entirely gay. Just...into Jason. Which isn't a bad thing, no, not at all. If anything, it makes it a lot more realistic. You could sharpen your comma use a little but other than that I don't see anything flawed about it. =) Great story.
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8/6/2008 c11 22Solar Confusion
That was awesome. I just read your whole story, and I must say congratulations. It was wonderful. :)
22Solar ConfusionThat was awesome. I just read your whole story, and I must say congratulations. It was wonderful. :)