for Sexual Deprivation12/20/2013 c1 FanOfU
Continuation of my review...
As I was saying she seems like a great main character overall,so I am very much interested in seeing how she'll deal with her (whore of a) sister and Jake(and his perverted ways). Please continue this!
Okay yeah,
LaterXoXo
Continuation of my review...
As I was saying she seems like a great main character overall,so I am very much interested in seeing how she'll deal with her (whore of a) sister and Jake(and his perverted ways). Please continue this!
Okay yeah,
LaterXoXo
12/20/2013 c1 FanOfU
Hey there!
So I have read your story (if it can be called that seeing as it's only one chapter or is it a prologue?) and I have to say that I love it. Leyiah (I'm sorry is that right?) seems like a great main character from the little glimpse I've seen of her personality she seems funny,fun and great overal
Hey there!
So I have read your story (if it can be called that seeing as it's only one chapter or is it a prologue?) and I have to say that I love it. Leyiah (I'm sorry is that right?) seems like a great main character from the little glimpse I've seen of her personality she seems funny,fun and great overal
9/15/2008 c1 mystic.fox
I can absolutely 100% agree with Leyah...we're on the same page about certain things. I can't wait for the next chapter.
I can absolutely 100% agree with Leyah...we're on the same page about certain things. I can't wait for the next chapter.
7/22/2008 c1 grumpirah
I can see already Raina's ass needs a beating. You don't come into someone else's house like that.
I can see already Raina's ass needs a beating. You don't come into someone else's house like that.
6/13/2008 c1 
8Random Awesome
I looked up to the ceiling letting out a sigh. I grabbed the knife. I loved my sister dearly, but if she didn’t shape up I might have to just cut that bitch. I blame my violent nature on being sexually deprived.
LOL! I was rollin' for real that sentence was funny and I like your story too. Hope you update.
8Random AwesomeI looked up to the ceiling letting out a sigh. I grabbed the knife. I loved my sister dearly, but if she didn’t shape up I might have to just cut that bitch. I blame my violent nature on being sexually deprived.
LOL! I was rollin' for real that sentence was funny and I like your story too. Hope you update.
5/24/2008 c1 IndianPrincess
Ok so now that you've wet our appetite when will we see an update would like to see where this story goes.
Thanks,
IP
Ok so now that you've wet our appetite when will we see an update would like to see where this story goes.
Thanks,
IP
5/21/2008 c1 Divisionred
Great start, I hope that you will update soon. Who is suppose to be the lead female's love interest? the 15 yr old neighbor? Thanks
Great start, I hope that you will update soon. Who is suppose to be the lead female's love interest? the 15 yr old neighbor? Thanks
5/16/2008 c1 readergirl1
Ok...I like how this is going. Please continue.
LOL...maybe because this reminds me of me and my sister. She was Raina and I was Leyah as teens!
Ok...I like how this is going. Please continue.
LOL...maybe because this reminds me of me and my sister. She was Raina and I was Leyah as teens!
5/16/2008 c1 10BabyPop Massacre
Yo. Thanks for reviewing my story.
This is definately a start of something. To go off topic for a sec, I sense a bit of defeat in both your author notes and your profile.(This one not the other one.) Don'ts gives ups! No matter what! Hell,if all else fails,I'll review your stories!
Keep it up! If you need assistance, I'd love to help. Till then I'll do my general duty and continue reviewing.
Peace.
-BPM
10BabyPop MassacreYo. Thanks for reviewing my story.
This is definately a start of something. To go off topic for a sec, I sense a bit of defeat in both your author notes and your profile.(This one not the other one.) Don'ts gives ups! No matter what! Hell,if all else fails,I'll review your stories!
Keep it up! If you need assistance, I'd love to help. Till then I'll do my general duty and continue reviewing.
Peace.
-BPM
5/15/2008 c1 11Lucid Lune in Acoustic
Okay, so, this does need a little bit of work but there isn't much out there that couldn't, in some way, be better. I think it's a good and a fun one and I love that she's black. I'm black and I don't find many stories about black girls on here. Hell, I don't even right them, too scared I'll make some sort of crucial mistake. What can I say, white neighborhood my whole life lol. But this isn't about race, it's just cool so continue to write and i'll read some more. Bye!
11Lucid Lune in AcousticOkay, so, this does need a little bit of work but there isn't much out there that couldn't, in some way, be better. I think it's a good and a fun one and I love that she's black. I'm black and I don't find many stories about black girls on here. Hell, I don't even right them, too scared I'll make some sort of crucial mistake. What can I say, white neighborhood my whole life lol. But this isn't about race, it's just cool so continue to write and i'll read some more. Bye!