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5/21/2008 c1 48poetofpain
I like your poem for it's realistic sense of the world. And I like the structure you used. However, you are wrong in one aspect, we can make it right young one. It will just take time. Keep writing.
5/13/2008 c1 Hani
wow, Jo. Very strong :) love it

xx
5/11/2008 c1 4roguedemonhunter
Wow, this is amazing! It's got a great rhythm (is that the right word to use?). I love the first four lines particularly, but the whole thing was very awesome. And the sentiment behind it is hard not to agree with, lol. It's beautiful :).

(this is Aimee, btw x))

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