for If only we were super heroes5/21/2008 c1 
48poetofpain
I like your poem for it's realistic sense of the world. And I like the structure you used. However, you are wrong in one aspect, we can make it right young one. It will just take time. Keep writing.
48poetofpainI like your poem for it's realistic sense of the world. And I like the structure you used. However, you are wrong in one aspect, we can make it right young one. It will just take time. Keep writing.
5/13/2008 c1 Hani
wow, Jo. Very strong :) love it
xx
wow, Jo. Very strong :) love it
xx
5/11/2008 c1 4roguedemonhunter
Wow, this is amazing! It's got a great rhythm (is that the right word to use?). I love the first four lines particularly, but the whole thing was very awesome. And the sentiment behind it is hard not to agree with, lol. It's beautiful :).
(this is Aimee, btw x))
4roguedemonhunterWow, this is amazing! It's got a great rhythm (is that the right word to use?). I love the first four lines particularly, but the whole thing was very awesome. And the sentiment behind it is hard not to agree with, lol. It's beautiful :).
(this is Aimee, btw x))